My site need english review

**gedan** · 08-27-2007, 02:28 PM

Hello,

My site free menu http://freemenu.gedan.com has a very simple layout and is write in portuguese and english.

I need help in english review.

**deltawing1** · 08-27-2007, 09:17 PM

Hi

I think it is unclear what the purpose of the site is, and I reckon the 3D text should be replaced with a cleaner font. I'm not saying you need to go with Web 2.0 fonts that probably have been overused anyway, but the 3D is probably harming the aesthetics, if you know what I mean :P

Good luck

**anindianspice** · 08-28-2007, 04:46 AM

So many grammatival mistakes.....

like

In few instants you will have a Professional Menu for its Site or BLOG with custom Headings

And layout is so untidy.........

**gedan** · 08-28-2007, 12:46 PM

OK Thank you very much

How arrange I the phrase :

In few instants you will have a Professional Menu for its Site or BLOG with custom Headings, URLs and colors.

**evolvexmb** · 08-28-2007, 02:23 PM

rrrrr

**katwright** · 08-28-2007, 03:48 PM

Try:
In a few clicks you will have a professional looking menu for your website or blog with fully customizable headings,URLs and colors.

Be careful with the capitalization !

**gedan** · 08-29-2007, 09:16 AM

OK

I will change

thank you very much

**topboy** · 08-29-2007, 04:03 PM

im not sure what the site does, you should make the first page a little clearer on what type of business your trying to promote then translate to english and portuguese

**dudesweetlol123** · 08-31-2007, 07:20 PM

Check the spelling

**ashish** · 09-01-2007, 02:40 AM

there are a lot of grammatical mistakes on the site, depending on your audience, it might be a good idea to have a friend who speaks good english go through the site contect with you...

**goheadtry** · 09-02-2007, 08:10 PM

I am sorry but, that is really ugly design it looks like you used free image makers online that are not the best and you just added a bunch of images everywhere I would suggest following a template design wise if you don't know what you are doing I hope that is helpful to you and good talkupation would be greatly appreciated.

**nancy4king** · 09-07-2007, 03:17 AM

One cannot know what your site is all about. You need to have a clear cut into page. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes on the site too. The design is not that good.