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Old 07-27-2007, 05:58 AM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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I like the intro at the beginning, but i think you should add a 'mission statement', i.e. what is the site about who is it for? what are you selling or promoting?

I also think the Homepage should equally reflect what i just mentioned. Videos are good but its not clear who this site is for. You can easily fix this by adding a mission statement on the homepage.

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Old 07-27-2007, 02:02 PM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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amazing! but I hate to break it to ya [someone else might have, but I cant be bothered looking] is that your animation on the top left is shifted up slightly from the rest of the nav image.

This is only when Im using Opera, it appears fine in FF2 and IE6.
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Old 07-27-2007, 05:10 PM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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The flash animation in the top left is very distracting in my opinion. Instead of looping the animation why not have it play once and then stop?

Apart from that the site looks good Nice work.
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Old 07-29-2007, 07:30 AM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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The site looks very professional. On the first page where you select you language I would make the background on the flash intro and put it as the whole page background so it blends in more. I would maybe make some buttons in photoshop for the 'English, Frencg etc'. Overall this is a very nicley laid out site that hasnt been overdone and looks very professional. Good work.

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I'd do that, but it's already heavy like that. I don't imagine what it would be if the whole page is a Flash...U have some examples?
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Old 08-08-2007, 04:58 AM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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I just got my first google rankings. I found my site in googly by typing "video graphic creation". Never thought it would happen !
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Old 08-09-2007, 12:26 PM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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1month!? bravo very impressive

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Old 08-10-2007, 12:42 AM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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I like your design but I hope it loads with javascript I got a PR 2 with google because I put one of those intros at the beginning of my site If that part of your code is not load with javascript I hope you would do so I hate to see people fail. Best of luck to you and I hope that helps youand Talkupation would be greatly appreciated
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Old 08-14-2007, 09:54 AM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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The flash animation in the top left is very distracting in my opinion. Instead of looping the animation why not have it play once and then stop?

Apart from that the site looks good Nice work.
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Old 08-14-2007, 09:56 AM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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amazing! but I hate to break it to ya [someone else might have, but I cant be bothered looking] is that your animation on the top left is shifted up slightly from the rest of the nav image.

This is only when Im using Opera, it appears fine in FF2 and IE6.
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Old 08-17-2007, 05:41 AM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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amazing! but I hate to break it to ya [someone else might have, but I cant be bothered looking] is that your animation on the top left is shifted up slightly from the rest of the nav image.

This is only when Im using Opera, it appears fine in FF2 and IE6.
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Old 08-17-2007, 07:38 AM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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very nice...I really like your Flash animation
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Old 08-18-2007, 07:00 PM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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Nice work and great use of flash !!
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Old 08-19-2007, 08:17 PM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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Very nice, clean professional site.

Your 1 English video has a spelling error I think. It says 45 Pays? Is that supposed to be 45 Days? I am not sure.

Other than that, very impressive. I liked your work on the fashion one.
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Old 08-21-2007, 03:42 AM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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Old 08-21-2007, 03:14 PM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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good job. only thing that is of concern might be the loading and movement of the flash that is a little sluggish on my computer.
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Old 08-21-2007, 11:08 PM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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I think you really did a hard work.i really like the color.

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Old 08-29-2007, 04:01 PM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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Very nice, clean professional site.

Your 1 English video has a spelling error I think. It says 45 Pays? Is that supposed to be 45 Days? I am not sure.

Other than that, very impressive. I liked your work on the fashion one.
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No, "Pays" is Countries in French. So it's 45 countries.
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Old 08-29-2007, 04:37 PM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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Looks very nice, one month of making it proffesional, Good work
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Old 08-29-2007, 04:55 PM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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the flash animation is great, looks and feels professional when i first look at your site
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Old 08-30-2007, 01:54 AM Re: PLZ review my hard work !
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That seems to be good and cool. All he best
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