Now my site is better (?) :p

**lukedahel** · 07-14-2007, 12:43 PM

Hi! I put my website comespanish.com here for a review a few weeks ago and nobody like it much, because it looked like a four year old without eyes created it.

But now I have changed everything and put in some suggestions of you all, like - I made it in the middle of the page, and I made it lighter so it doesn't hurt your eyes. Do you think this looks better now.. any other suggestions??? Web making is not my special ability..

Could anyone with a heart and free time of 5 minutes make a better banner than mine, with the words comespanish.com and a picture of shakira?.) I would make it up to you one day, that is totally sure..
Thanks all,

Luque

comespanish.com

**zm0nky** · 07-15-2007, 12:35 AM

I like the idea. I think you should move the song selection list up to the top so it is the first thing instead of the banner ads and your picture(nothing against you but that isnt why people should be going there, eh?) You could also make the link the Verbs of Glory more clearly a link to another page it looks kind of like a title to the current page the way it is now. Maybe make an actual navbar for people to see.

**HighVoltage123** · 07-16-2007, 08:25 AM

I think you should work on it a little bit more

**lukedahel** · 07-16-2007, 09:08 AM

Haha yeah well bad news, as soon as I made this post some bad things happened and my 'new site' turned out to be total disaster, and I had to put it back to the old one, so nobody look at it yet. !

**css25** · 07-16-2007, 11:53 AM

Hi,
I really like the idea of that website, however, you may need to work on it a little bit more, such as change the template, like that. Still, I like the idea of your website. Well done and keep it up

**dee_el07** · 07-16-2007, 12:00 PM

I like your site..But try to add something more, I cant precisely point out what was missing.. well maybe put up some brighter color.. that's it! but all in all.. its a great site!

**Daniel St. Jule** · 07-16-2007, 05:09 PM

I like the concept of the site: offers an innovative way to learn a new language while having fun. This could easily target a whole new market of users.

But I agree with the others that the site seems to be missing something. In my opinion, I think more of a blog like layout would be suitable, with the links to the various songs you've translated in a left menu, and the content in the centre.

Also, you might want to use some spam prevention techniques for contacting you, or else that e-mail will most likely receive a lot of unwanted messages. Maybe a contact form would be a better alternative?

But anyway, good work. =)

**nancy4king** · 10-05-2007, 04:12 AM

The concept of the site is good. Add some more content and work on the image of the girl on the header image. It appears stretched out.