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I like the color theme, it's very pleasing and looks good. However, the links on the top tabs are rather difficult to read, light blue/gray doesn't work too well with white background.
I don't quite like the heading of your copy, "Let me build your web-site" it doesn't make me wish to continue reading. The headline should grab one's attention and make the user want to read what you have to say. Also, if there are no valid reason you should always use normal text as the heading, not an image with the text.
I like the way you introduce yourself in the beginning, but why don't you say who you are? What's your name or the name of your company? What about a picture of you? Also, I would recommend you to write in shorter sentences, long sentences can quickly make people to stop reading and leave.
You have a phone number on your site, that's very good, but how about a full street address? Also, your 100% money back guarantee is good, but why only write about it? Don't be shy, add a graphical button or a logo that also says the same.
In a web design business it's always good to have testimonials and/or past clients right on your front page. But why you have them on the bottom? They should be on the top. And why not use their logos? You could put a box under the left navigation area with names and logos of some of your past clients and write "My past clients include..." or "Our past clients include..."
You should perhaps make your logo as a link to your front page, this is something that most people are accustomed to. Also, perhaps you should remove the FAQ section since there really are no FAQ items yet.
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