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Old 04-30-2007, 11:37 AM Please Review my site!
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This is my site:
http://www.fantasyfootballguru.co.uk

it is around 3 months old, I have recently changed the design of it and would like your opinions on it, and anything you think that I can improve.

Thanks in advance for your help
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Old 04-30-2007, 06:47 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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I personally find the colors to dark.
But I'm biased here, as I'm a long supporter of white/grey soft colors, almost burned to white.

What comes fast to my mind too is that the site looks "compressed" on the left.
I'm on a 4/3 screen on 1280x1024, and I have a big white section of my browser on the right.
It's too much contrast with the black/orange on the left.
Either try to center the content, or specify a darker body background.

I see a lot of text on the index, but there's no index or summary ?
I don't think many peoples will scroll all the way down.
At least, I wouldn't. I'd add a summary box at the top, a bit like you can see on wiki pages.

Finally, as cool looking is your widget on the right, it's slow to load, and almost freeze my comp for 3 seconds when displaying it.
It may be my comp (I'm on winXp, and it's so slow compared to linux), but on a p4 3Ghz with 2Go ram, it's a bit extreme nonetheless.
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Old 05-01-2007, 03:45 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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I have made a few changes!
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Old 05-01-2007, 04:27 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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It's better I find. The contrast less violent.
But really this big space on the rightis annoying....


Why not try something like that:


I simply added align="center" on your 2 tables, and style="margin: aut o;" on your footer to achieve that.

The human eye and brain like the symmetry.
Peoples will tend to find your site more equilibrate if there is a proportionality concept in the layout.
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Old 05-01-2007, 04:53 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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i've got to say, David, that I like tripy's center style better. Ultimately its your site and it should be what you want. But IMHO, that centered one is much nicer.
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Old 05-01-2007, 05:31 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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Ye i agree it should be in the center. Couple other things as well.
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Old 05-01-2007, 06:18 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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Of course, I'm not pushing you to change your layout.
I'm just giving you my 2 cents.

I'm far from perfect, and I surely ain't a designer....
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Old 05-01-2007, 07:38 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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I can see what you mean from your pics, I am going to put it into the center. Looks much better!!!!
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Old 05-02-2007, 01:21 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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It looks pretty good, not to sure about black/orange but thats my personal preference
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Old 05-05-2007, 09:30 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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I am not of fan of the color scheme. It reminds me of holloween. Also the text in the header is tough to read.
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Old 05-06-2007, 04:17 AM Re: Please Review my site!
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at higher resolutions your text tends to disappear. Site looks nice though
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Old 05-06-2007, 05:59 AM Re: Please Review my site!
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looks good bubt i also had the text problemb
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Old 05-06-2007, 09:29 AM Re: Please Review my site!
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You should change widht to 95%. Otherwise align the whole site to the center. Everything else fits together.
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Old 05-06-2007, 10:01 AM Re: Please Review my site!
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wow i really like the design, however i would add a black shadow on the top image text, as orange is kinda hard to see with the background.

and i would make the adsense background grey, like the rest of the site so it blends in.

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Old 05-06-2007, 10:26 AM Re: Please Review my site!
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Cool Design,
personally I like the content
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Old 05-06-2007, 10:55 AM Re: Please Review my site!
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It's alright, decent design..
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Old 05-06-2007, 07:43 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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Definitely need to put it in the center - tripy has got the right idea.
Try bolding the words that are in orange, as they have a tendency to dissappear. If that doesnt work - I would reconsider the color choice.
Also, when you click into some of the links (ie Forums) - it opens a new window and you cannot get back to your homepage from that new window. For consistency - maybe use the banner and color scheme on your homepage throughout the site. Make it so that if you click on the banner, it links you back to the homepage.
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Old 05-07-2007, 12:23 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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Thanks for the tips guys.

When you say text problems, what do you mean,, How do i fix them?
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Old 05-07-2007, 01:18 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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May I suggest using yellow instaed of orange. Also how about thowing a bit of green and blue somewhere in there. I would also lose the grey, It really kills it for me.
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Old 05-07-2007, 01:24 PM Re: Please Review my site!
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I thought it would be good to have a white background on the main text.
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