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Name: Adam for web page design, not program
Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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Agreed with both LNR and AHelpingHand on the marquee and music, so I won't beat them to death.
Your biggest problem that I can see is consistency; you don't have the major menu elements repeated across all pages. A consistent layout that is easily navigable is one of the most important elements of a site. Come up with a layout for your home page, and then change the interior section (where the home page text is) for the other pages. That way, people can navigate and use it and not get confused.
Next on the agenda: your home page. What's your site about? I look at it and I really can't tell. There's no text to indicate as such. This is good for both users and search engines. Textual content is a form of crack cocaine for search engines, and it's up to you to give 'em a nice push.
Some fonts are meant for plain text purposes. BernhardMod BT and New Century Schoolbook are not two of those fonts. Stick to things like Times New Roman (as ugly as it is), Times, Georgia, Arial, Verdana, Tahoma, Helvetica, etc. for fonts, or your text will end up very hard to read.
Finally, don't be afraid to get yourself a copy of Photoshop or your favourite graphic editor and do a little work in that regard. It looks like you're trying to do everything with text, and it's just not working out for you.
Hope that helps.
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