A Flash Intro For A Client

**ATLien** · 04-13-2004, 06:54 PM

Hey everyone, i just made this for a client, I don't plan to make changes but I would like ya'lls feedback on it. What do you think? What don't you like?

Please don't comment that you hate avril.

http://www.ATLienGeorgia.com/avril/

**rhythmphile** · 04-13-2004, 07:26 PM

I like the overall concept, I think the fading on her face on the right gets annoying after the first few times, and the quality of the background music really bothers me, I do however realize the size of the file is an issue. Nothing fancy but it gets the job done.

**DaveMo~** · 04-13-2004, 07:29 PM

I think that looks sharp. How long through the song before you'll add the button to go inside?

Okay, did you enhance her eyes?

Dave

**ATLien** · 04-13-2004, 08:38 PM

well the site is not done yet, I gave him a file that instead of having the coming soon fade in, it will fade in enter and will link to his site. I also have a by pass intro button on the version for when the site is up. Enhance her eys? Nope, she just has really beautiful eyes.

**Filmgirl** · 04-13-2004, 09:57 PM

Is that for an official site?

**ATLien** · 04-13-2004, 10:05 PM

no, just a fan site.

**Filmgirl** · 04-13-2004, 10:06 PM

Kick a**, you're getting paid to make a fansite!

**ATLien** · 04-14-2004, 01:18 AM

I am not making the site, just the intro. That is a true fan. I run a LP fan site, and I put money into it, if you are a true fan, you are not bothered that it might cost money.

**simon71** · 04-14-2004, 07:47 AM

Hi

Really like the idea, a few ideas I have thought of:

1. Have you thought about fading the pictures in instead of sliding them in, I have Broadband and they are a little slow?
2. Also after the picture has finished appearing what about fading it slightly so the next one is more prominent?
3. The fading in and out of the main picture is a little distracting, maybe either slow it down or stop it all together?
4. The music is a little fuzzy is there a way of enhancing it?

I hope this is of some help, and would hope the rest of the site would be as good as this!

Ps good choice of tune!!

**tonya** · 04-14-2004, 08:25 AM

I like flash intro's and actually like this apart from a few small comments.

The blinking of the main picture as simon pointed out is a bit distracting. Either fade the image in and out more slowly or not at all.

What about fading the images into black and white after they have shown?

I like it though very nice.

**Mike Panic** · 04-15-2004, 01:33 AM

im on dsl so no pre-loaded was needed for me... 2 things though

i dont think the song was right... and the images that slide in from top to bottom take to long... that whole intro was about 15 seconds long... id try to cut it down to 8-12 seconds as most

generally speaking.. i HATE splash intro's anyway - but thats just me. also... when the site does go live, make sure to include a "skip intro" button