Brutal Honesty required

**katkac279** · 01-25-2007, 04:07 PM

I have just redisigned my home and think it looks good.

http://financial-independence.net/

Please tell me your opinions, what could make it any better?

**RanaD** · 05:16 PM

What exactly looks good again?

The simple animation of "Money from Nothing" at the top doesn't look perfectly professional.

The menu on the side is boringly drab plain text links without even an attempt to make it look remotely appealing.

If you made money, surely you could invest in someone checking your spelling?

If you have to have your keywords at the top and bottom, do it with some style so it has some meaning to normal browsers as well, not just search engines.

Your HTML validation at W3C fails on 93 errors.

Go back to the drawing board.

*Oops, thought you were somebody who was brutal elsewhere, so I dished out without tact, however you did say brutal honesty required, so I'm leaving my post intact. Need help, PM me and I'll do it with more tact, just to make up!*

**Adam Fletcher** · 01-25-2007, 05:41 PM

No a nice design to be honest. I can help you out with a professional design as well as SEO and content writing

Just my 2 cents

**katkac279** · 01-26-2007, 08:13 AM

That was definetly honest Ranad, Cheers

I will sort out the HTML

Quote:

No a nice design to be honest. I

Does that mean you do or don't like it Adam?

**3rdShiftStudios** · 01-26-2007, 10:02 AM

I really think it doesn't come off as a company I would trust with any financial dicisions. You can't fix one thing, b/c the whole thing just needs to be turned into a professional page.

I suggest consulting with an actual design firm who can build a site that will be contemporary as well as showcase you as an expert who can assist with their money making attepts.

Good luck and feel free to contact me directly with any more questions or if you would like a quote =)

**Adam Fletcher** · 01-26-2007, 10:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by katkac279

Does that mean you do or don't like it Adam?

I think that should have said not a nice design. You need to do something more professional in my opinion