Re: My 1st webby!

**clement** · 02-20-2004, 02:50 AM

hey guys..could you all visit my webby and gif mi your reviews?
the address is [SNIPPED]
Please give mi your suggestions and reviews!
You all could also join my forum and sign my guestbook..
thx alot!

: Please read the rules. You need to do three reviews before asking for a review.

**jammin411** · 02-20-2004, 02:59 AM

Where to start. Get rid of the mouse trailer. Those are just flat out annoying. Also get rid of the two animations of people shooting me. It does not go with the site at all. The buttons at the top, don't use them. I didn't even know they were buttons until I was trying to get away from the mouse trailer and happened to run over them. Some of the button text does not even fit on some buttons. SPELL CHECK!!!!! What is the mailing list for???? Let people know what they will get if they give you their email addy, and what you will do with their address if they do give it to you. Move the copyright to the very bottom. That is where I will end it.