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Name: Adam for web page design, not program
Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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To be honest, I think you missed the point completely on a few levels.
If you're trying to promote your services, why the hell would you give away that many tools that you would presumably use? You're not only doing that for your users, you're doing that for competitors too.
You have a horizontal scrollbar at 937 pixels wide.
Your concept is going to set you up to get SCREWED by the first a**hole who decides to be unsatisfied about something and not pay you for it. I give it 5 customers before that happens. You'd better have some boundaries laid out for satisfaction upfront.
Your copy has some spelling errors ("belive" instead of "believe").
This is just surface stuff having looked at two pages.
Your idea is destined to fail unless you do a 180 on it.
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