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It needs more punch.
Try thinning out the copy for a start:
"Welcome to GameGarage, a site packed with free online games. Below you can find a selection of the best games from each category. On the left you can use the Games Menu to browse each different category and fulfill your gaming needs. To find out more about this site and how to contact us, there are some links at the bottom of every page."
WHo needs that much text about contact links? You talk more about the site navigation than about the site content.
2/10 - Un-exciting. The subject matter demands a more fun, coulourful design.
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