#1 (permalink)

Hello!

Please review this site I made; its a "demo" site that I did for practice; and also a competition; I want your feedback on it before I enter it because the prize I won would be donated to a non profit of my choice; so I'd like to try hard to win to get a non profit a free domain name; and I'd also do them its own site.

I believe its 100% pro and clean layout!

What do you think?

ChocoLovers, Inc.

-Skippy Tim

This is one of my 52 competitiors that I found on a forum: ChocoLovers, INC.
Do you like mine better than that one?

#2 (permalink)

I think the site is very well laid out.

#3 (permalink)

I like the colors and the layout, but I really think you should consider working with css and drop the tables. You should also add doctype and character encoding. Also consider to change the menu from images to text. And keep the backgound in another color then white. Turn of images in your browser and you'll see what I mean. There's not much there.

Before enter any competition you should also validate your site.

Other than that, and of course many things that can be better on any page, I like it. Nice site.

#4 (permalink)

This site is the most beautiful site I've ever seen...(because its about chocolate), but to me, id suggest having more pictures of the chocolate your producing. So customers can see intricate details if the chocolate is handmade.

Other than that it looks great apart from a few broken images

I hope this helped ya

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Broken Images? Elaborate Please?

Oh, by the way; I will add photos of the truffles tommorow.