yesthisismyday.com home of the cutests - plz review

**ironmonk3y** · 08-27-2006, 11:05 AM

Its ok.... dont really like the desing though...

**yesthisismyday** · 08-29-2006, 06:35 PM

**7Hunters** · 08-31-2006, 12:59 AM

I really liked the graphics on the site, the fun colors and the original concept. It's well done - even though I tend to not like Flash web sites. I too had some trouble understanding the idea behind the site, it doesn't immediately translate. I read the directions and still didn't get it. It's cute though and I kept looking at things - so that's cool.

It really looks like you've brought your vision to life and it's professional so good job!

**yesthisismyday** · 03:12 PM

thank you!
I'm building a solid plan and trategy for the site. I'll post it here soon to get some helps

**yesthisismyday** · 09-09-2006, 11:24 PM

logo in french, just bought Welcome to YesThisIsmyDay, Home of the Cutests, i think its acool name

**yesthisismyday** · 09-14-2006, 01:57 PM

logo in french with domain www.ouicestmonjour.com

= good investment

Full view: http://www.vnjournal.com/yes_gallery...wallpaper1.png

Full-view: http://www.vnjournal.com/yes_gallery..._dont_that.png

**yesthisismyday** · 09-22-2006, 12:53 AM

I have little baby story first draft for you guys to enjoy

here
please help me correct the puntuation/grammar errors if you find them

http://www.vnjournal.com/yesthisismy...by%20story.pdf

comments and advices are more than welcome

**intiendes** · 09-22-2006, 03:11 AM

I think you should change your intro page .. above mentioned ... image is too big ... make it smaller` so that in one view ... everything on the first page could be seen ... SCREENSHOT <-- that for now doesnt look good

and for pic that best describe : memorable, creative, adorable
and also to tell, to share and to celebrate
I choose this

For me its the BEST picture

**yesthisismyday** · 10-09-2006, 04:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by intiendes

I think you should change your intro page .. above mentioned ... image is too big ... make it smaller` so that in one view ... everything on the first page could be seen ... SCREENSHOT <-- that for now doesnt look good

and for pic that best describe : memorable, creative, adorable
and also to tell, to share and to celebrate
I choose this

For me its the BEST picture

I'll definitely reduce the size to 550 in the next update.

**bizops** · 10-11-2006, 03:56 AM

Unnecessary splash page, in fact, if I scroll down: why so many links? I probably wouldn't stay there too long.

**yesthisismyday** · 10-12-2006, 04:37 PM

here is my little bay story slide show ( 20 slides). I'm working on the story n' illustration. there's more coming

http://s92.photobucket.com/albums/l1...slideshow=true

I'm looking for good writer partner to develop the story, it's possible to create a script/illustration board for the animation film.
All my designs r extremly simple ( for future development purpose)

**Sean77771** · 10-12-2006, 06:17 PM

Well, it's very...cute. A bit confusing as to what the whole point of the site is, if I had stumbled onto it I probably wouldn't stick around for long.

**yesthisismyday** · 10-17-2006, 02:04 PM

I've managed to add some FAQs in, please take a look and let me know what you think
www.yesthisismyday.com , I retype the link to save you the time. thank you Sean

**yesthisismyday** · 10-17-2006, 02:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by yesthisismyday

here is my little bay story slide show ( 20 slides). I'm working on the story n' illustration. there's more coming

http://s92.photobucket.com/albums/l1...slideshow=true

I'm looking for good writer partner to develop the story, it's possible to create a script/illustration board for the animation film.
All my designs r extremly simple ( for future development purpose)

this is belong to a series of little baby adventures in yesthisismyday project. I need a flash expert to help me develop a crazy idea. I know you guys hate people that ask for free work, so I won't. I just want s.o who is interested in this and want to be part of this.

**Invictus** · 10-17-2006, 02:43 PM

This may seem harsh, but you did ask for feedback so...

The homepage, well, it's too long and having to scroll down to get to the 'meat' of the page, where you try, but fail, to explain what it's all about, it's just not professional or slick or even wacky. It's just amateur.

You need to simplify your pages, use two or three main characters per page an theme the page around them, explain clearly, in big bold text and plain language what your site is about. What are you offering that I might want to visit your site for?

Is it entertaining? Offering a service? A Community? A portal? What?

Please do keep trying though, because despite all the wrong things with your site I really like the artwork.

If English is your second language (and to be honest you write like it is) then get someone else to write your copy for you. Tell them what you want to say but let them put it into proper meaningful sentences.

Anyway enough for now and thanks for sharing.

**yesthisismyday** · 10-23-2006, 01:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Invictus

This may seem harsh, but you did ask for feedback so...

The homepage, well, it's too long and having to scroll down to get to the 'meat' of the page, where you try, but fail, to explain what it's all about, it's just not professional or slick or even wacky. It's just amateur.

You need to simplify your pages, use two or three main characters per page an theme the page around them, explain clearly, in big bold text and plain language what your site is about. What are you offering that I might want to visit your site for?

Is it entertaining? Offering a service? A Community? A portal? What?

Please do keep trying though, because despite all the wrong things with your site I really like the artwork.

If English is your second language (and to be honest you write like it is) then get someone else to write your copy for you. Tell them what you want to say but let them put it into proper meaningful sentences.

Anyway enough for now and thanks for sharing.

Thank you! I'll try to improve more

**yesthisismyday** · 10-23-2006, 02:14 PM

I can always use some expert advice on how to design a good looking site

**royce** · 10-24-2006, 10:39 PM

ahh..I guess it will appeal to its target audience, I have no clue what it is for...I guess I'm just an old fuddy duddy ..sorry..good luck

**yesthisismyday** · 10-27-2006, 06:15 PM

http://www.vnjournal.com/yesthisismy...0adventure.swf

new development, enjoy people!

**yesthisismyday** · 11-08-2006, 01:32 PM

hey guys, come back and take a look. I hope you'll like it and find the site more presentable