Please review my site

**indipets** · 08-06-2006, 07:33 AM

Please see my site Dogs,Ornamental fishes,Birds, Reptiles A online store selling them all live and also their supplies deliveries in India,USA and UK selling both wholesale and retail and comment.

It has three distinct parts

ONLINE STORE FOR PETS. ORNAMENTAL FISHES,DOGS,CATS,BIRDS,AMPHIBIANS,REPTILES, Trees,seeds and plants (here i have kept my articles)

Exporter of all types of aquarium fishes,reptiles,amphibians,corals,marine fish,CITES Certified animals and ornamental fishes Our wholesale section

Please see and comment i am aggressively looking for pet related site link exchanges and other advertisements. I am also interetsd for inclusion in webdirectory so owners of these sites plz contact me. I am willing to pay.

**anon** · 08-06-2006, 08:40 AM

loading very slow for me here in Lithuania

**indipets** · 08-06-2006, 09:08 AM

Yes Pages are bit Heavy sorry. but what about other aspects?

**Lisa Bloom** · 08-06-2006, 01:47 PM

Site is a bit on the slow site. I would also suggets that you work on the navigation.

**jason_bristol** · 08-06-2006, 03:05 PM

loaded slow for me aswell. That would take ages for a dial up user to view. The first page most importantly needs to load fast. You need to make the navigation better and not put it all on the first page (I guess you've done that to improve your search site rankings for your homepage).
Some of you text is serif and some sans serif. you should only have one or the other really.

**ADAM Web Design** · 08-06-2006, 04:49 PM

It's over-SEOed. That's the first thought.

Take a look at the titles...you're cramming too much into them. A good title is 6-8 words. You're way over that count.

The articles won't do you a bit of good since they're obviously other people's articles.

The keywords down at the bottom are going to do you harm as well. Get rid of them.

My second thought is that you've got the wrong idea. You're trying to do what millions of others have tried (and failed) to do...slap-*** a site together, throw some affiliate links and content from other sites on it, try to find link exchanges and directories with sufficient lack of content to have to include your site, and hope to God you gain some form of ranking and make money.

IT ISN'T GONNA HAPPEN. Please consider this your initial reality check.

In other words, you really need to learn how to build sites for users, not engines. When you do that, the profit will come (so too will the SE stuff.)

You'd be better off not wasting any more time with this and building something a lot better.

**moondog** · 08-06-2006, 06:59 PM

page is too long
take care about text (don't use so may type of fonts)
divide your pages in logical subpages

P.S. Maybe ...listen what Adam said...try again

**indipets** · 08-06-2006, 10:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ADAM Web Design

It's over-SEOed. That's the first thought.

Take a look at the titles...you're cramming too much into them. A good title is 6-8 words. You're way over that count.

The articles won't do you a bit of good since they're obviously other people's articles.

The keywords down at the bottom are going to do you harm as well. Get rid of them.

My second thought is that you've got the wrong idea. You're trying to do what millions of others have tried (and failed) to do...slap-*** a site together, throw some affiliate links and content from other sites on it, try to find link exchanges and directories with sufficient lack of content to have to include your site, and hope to God you gain some form of ranking and make money.

IT ISN'T GONNA HAPPEN. Please consider this your initial reality check.

In other words, you really need to learn how to build sites for users, not engines. When you do that, the profit will come (so too will the SE stuff.)

You'd be better off not wasting any more time with this and building something a lot better.

Sir,
thanks for your comments . plthat articles are written by me some i have taken from ezine. I have failed to convey you the basic concept. Look sir, its a site which sells its own products as well as affiliate products. Now there are few section of the site.

Exporter of all types of aquarium fishes,reptiles,amphibians,corals,marine fish,CITES Certified animals and ornamental fishes This is a part of the site which sells my own products and has a shoping cart.
Pets,Fish,Birds,carnivorous plants, Dogs, cats we export and retail all types of pets this section is designed excatly like my own wholesale shop but shows my affiliate products. (this is for retail buyers)
ONLINE STORE FOR PETS. ORNAMENTAL FISHES,DOGS,CATS,BIRDS,AMPHIBIANS,REPTILES, Trees,seeds and plants Now this is an entire different section. The approach IU have taken here is like this.

I have taken selected around 200 products from m y affiliates and made a individual page for them from a common template. theses pages are designed like this. Suppose I have a dog toy to sell. Now I create a page with 1 article (some of the articles written by me some copied from ezines), few banner, and webring etc and write title and description and individually promote these pages. I was happy like that but I made the page ONLINE STORE FOR PETS. ORNAMENTAL FISHES,DOGS,CATS,BIRDS,AMPHIBIANS,REPTILES, Trees,seeds and plants just to help search engines gather these 200 individual pages

So basically its not a part of Exporter of all types of aquarium fishes,reptiles,amphibians,corals,marine fish,CITES Certified animals and ornamental fishes its a different part of the site built just to promote Dogs,Ornamental fishes,Birds, Reptiles A online store selling them all live and also their supplies deliveries in India,USA and UK selling both wholesale and retail .

Now with all the links I have of all sites If any one can make a better navigation for my site or re-design it with the sam econtent and databse then I will pay 200 US$ if any one of you goodself wishes to help me. Please do....

**indipets** · 08-06-2006, 10:11 PM

P.S. i know its not too attractive But I get arund 5 US$ daily on average Sometimes there are bigger sales also....

Now I plan big with this site. I plan to add a forum and a newsletter and a directory I have purchased 2 more of the domain indipets so i basicall plan to transfer ONLINE STORE FOR PETS. ORNAMENTAL FISHES,DOGS,CATS,BIRDS,AMPHIBIANS,REPTILES, Trees,seeds and plants to a entire new domain as an individualk site and leave Exporter of all types of aquarium fishes,reptiles,amphibians,corals,marine fish,CITES Certified animals and ornamental fishes like what it is with little changes to the design .

Now If any one of you think you can get me streamlined I am willing to pay a honorium to whoever helps me to complete this te. nbo design only making it more navigational... PLEASE HELP ME.

**ADAM Web Design** · 08-06-2006, 10:33 PM

Okay, you lost me there, dude. I'm sorry...I can't help you until you explain yourself a bit better (or someone else does...I'm not picky.)

**indipets** · 08-07-2006, 01:05 AM

I have more supplementry pages because I run a cart like site pages in which are auto generated from search querries so there are many supplementry links. And as all these days i was fcusing in popularising one page at a time and now i have atleast 10 pages in my site with pr 4+ rest are relkatively new. The domain is 3 so whats actually gone wrong?? Now the page where i got all the pages listed is just uploaded. and most of my pages are yet to be ranked. Thats what google site mep stats says me. Any idea??

**yesthisismyday** · 08-07-2006, 03:49 AM

you have a nice site. I have a really cute dog named kiki here : yesthisismyday.com

**ADAM Web Design** · 08-07-2006, 12:26 PM

What's gone wrong is exactly what I told you has gone wrong...you've got way too many affiliate links. And Google (well...Matt Cutts) has stated that one of the factors that they're looking at is affiliate hyperlinking. Sites that do that tend not to be of as high a quality as those that don't, and tend to have a vested interest as well.

I don't see any at all that actually link to products that you sell yourself, or anything even remotely resembling a cart. It just looks like a hodgepodge of stuff. All I've seen are Share a Sale, CJ, and I think one LinkShare link.

And for every "product" page you have, I see keywords stuffed at the bottom (yet another trick that will get you penalized if not banned) and I see articles in some cases that have at best a partial tie-in to the products themselves.

You're lost. You don't have a store that most people will shop in.

Look at the retail sites that really stand out (the Amazons, the Chapters, the Barnes and Nobles). Try to do as they do.

**bretrichter** · 08-11-2006, 02:52 AM

If I was a user, after the first three seconds of white, I would of left.(Like I just did.)

**LillianaS** · 08-17-2006, 08:14 PM

I agree with the above, the page is far too long and try and stick to the same font type/colour.

Try and catagorize pages a little more clearly and with less clutter...

Other than that your doing fine.

Anna

**matt probert** · 08-18-2006, 07:29 AM

The first page is FAR too long!

I seriously suggest some major redesign to break things up into manageable sections.

Matt