Review my site, bewarned it's very girlie...

**Filmgirl** · 07:58 PM

It's a Shipper site (a site based on a relationship from a tv show) I'm redoing for my own personal entertainment and all the other 2000 plus members on the board on my site:

click here

**zscherween** · 12-12-2003, 01:15 AM

The Site looks cool! except for...
-The scrolling text is hard to read. try black/white or similar combination)
-It's still under-construction on some part
-The vertical text on the right side seems to blend in the background.

Rate:5/10

**nickgraham** · 01-01-2004, 04:02 PM

A few comments:

The scrollbar in the iframe is a little bit hard to see (white on white), but that doesn't matter.

Maybe you could try installing a forum (phpBB or Invision?) on your webspace without using the free suddenlaunch.com one (with ugly big ads). Same with the guestbook and maybe chat (harder to do).

I have found in the past if you are using chat it is quite good to organise times when everyone goes on it.

I like the flash animation at the top, but maybe it takes a bit too much space to be used on every page (if you weren't using iframes).

You may be spammed if you have your email addy on the contact page - maybe add NOSPAM or something?

The search doesn't seem to work - I think the Sparklit end of link (</a>) should be before the bravenet stuff.

I may have got a popup from your site (may have been another) but I can't stand popup adverts.

Overall I would give it 6.5 / 10.

Sorry this is my first review, so it isn't all that good.

**deathdemon321** · 01-01-2004, 05:23 PM

Besides things that people have already said, the site is overall pretty good.

7/10

**OnlyPhp.Com** · 01-01-2004, 10:17 PM

I really like it . Especially the header animation with the girl and boy. The frame part looks well also. I like the buttons , navigation , colors.

8/10 Good luck

**Russellclow** · 01-02-2004, 01:12 PM

Yeh i have to agree, the header animation is superb. really adds a bit of style to the page. The colour is errr..well...girly, but not bad. and of coarse, the page rocks cos lana lang is so inbelievably hot.

9/10 just for lana alone

**The Crow** · 01-02-2004, 02:32 PM

Very well done. I saw this site when I visited your site. Nice work.

**Calash** · 01-02-2004, 04:13 PM

You alwayse come up with some of the coolest looking flash sites

The only minor worry I have is the load time for dial-up users. On my DLS it was very fast for a site with that much content, so dial-up may not be a problem.

The scrolling text is a bit fast for my taste. You may want to slow it down a tiny bit, and possably have it stop when the mouse is over it, so people can pause it to read.

Very well done

**Filmgirl** · 01-03-2004, 08:44 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Calash
The scrolling text is a bit fast for my taste. You may want to slow it down a tiny bit, and possably have it stop when the mouse is over it, so people can pause it to read.

Do you by any chance have the code for that?

**flipsided** · 01-04-2004, 02:53 AM

Very nice site, kind of hard to read on the right, and not really my type of site, but its good.

6/10.

**Calash** · 03:31 AM

Here is a link to one that will pause when the mouse is over it. I have seen this used on a couple of sites and it works very well.

http://www.dynamicdrive.com/dynamicindex2/cmarquee.htm

**semiotica** · 01-11-2004, 04:54 PM

Hi,

I saw your photo and I found your photos very nice.

The graphic is sample but good for this type of site.

Good looking.

and good animation, soft but good.

nice work

semio

**elendil** · 01-11-2004, 06:23 PM

I think the front page should stands to max 2 screen .... consider those who have a lower resolution.

The color design is very good ... i like how the bg and the central logo are matches.

Keep in mine that i am only a beginner and i feel a bit bad about giving some critics to a professionnaly looking website :-)

**Montero** · 01-11-2004, 07:41 PM

way too much information on the first page.... and frames.....

6/10