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Old 07-15-2006, 10:53 AM Review, PLEASE!
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Everyone, please review my site... not sure what to do with it. http://www.unicorn-corporationsonline.com/

The good think about it is I'm currently receiving about 45++ hits a day.
Suggestions are welcome!!
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Old 07-15-2006, 11:16 AM Re: Review, PLEASE!
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I like the general look of the site but I have a few suggestions just remember there only opinions

-The top menu does appear to me to be over crowded
-The footer would look better centered
-Hit counter could be hidden so you can see it and not visitors? they just don't do the design justice.

I was viewing the site using FireFox.
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Old 07-15-2006, 01:13 PM Re: Review, PLEASE!
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I agree with slayer... the menu doesn't look good because some options go on the next line. Also, I dont like how you have:
SFO RevolutionsV3




The new revolution of gaming!





If you have the picture there already why not have the text in a pictire? I think you can write it nicer in photoshop.





And the last - why do you have so much empty space in the body? Bring the footer up. you don't use the space after "Enter you destiny", so delete it.
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Old 07-15-2006, 02:20 PM Re: Review, PLEASE!
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very nice...
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Old 07-15-2006, 06:31 PM Re: Review, PLEASE!
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The header "SFO Revolutions V3" is very difficult to read, the color and bakground are not a good mix.

OMG.. you've used an XHTML DOCTYPE but you're using deprecated HTML all over the place.. not good

Practically ALL of this is deprecated HTML:

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<P align=center><STRONG><FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#ffd700 size=5></FONT></STRONG>&nbsp;</P>
Dump the <font> tag, use CSS for all presentation.
Don't use fonts like Comic Sans, not everyone is going to have it.
Use em's or % for font sizes, dont' handcuff your visitors to px or pt font sizes.
If you're going to use this kind of 1997 coding, drop your DOCTYPE back to HTML 4.01
You've got <div>s and CSS in there, now use it properly.


Design is nice.
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Old 07-15-2006, 09:14 PM Re: Review, PLEASE!
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Design looks good overall, the top image or a link needs to be added that links back to the main page. So of your content is...off topic, you have links to your other site so mention them in an about us or put them in your footer, they don't need to be part of your main content.
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Old 07-15-2006, 09:33 PM Re: Review, PLEASE!
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its a good look for a gaming site
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Old 07-16-2006, 06:53 AM Re: Review, PLEASE!
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Somewhat generic, in my opinion. As LadynRed mentioned, the red and white text at the header is horrific in terms of color scheme. Take it off, and add the tag line to the bottom of the text on the left side of the header image.

I'm also reminded that it's a template for Freewebs customers. How nice.

At least it'll attract those who game, I think.
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Old 07-16-2006, 08:42 PM Re: Review, PLEASE!
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nice how you managing to get 40+ hits a day?
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