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Old 06-26-2006, 12:58 AM Luny Designs
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My website is still in the works but I am really loving CSS. I wish I brought more references on it before. Please tell me how my site looks and what I can improve on it..

http://www.lunydesigns.com
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Old 06-26-2006, 10:17 AM Re: Luny Designs
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Good work, but a few things you need to correct:

Don't use <br>s to space your text, use padding and margins. You have text inside a span, don't use it that way. Your text needs to be in paragraphs and you can style the paragraphs, including spacing between them.

Same goes for the leftsidebar. You've got <br>s after the UL - add margin to the bottom of the UL and put the rest inside paragraphs.

On your Services page you have the following:
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<li class="style7">Java </li>
<li class="style7">Visual BASIC </li>
<li class="style7">PHP</li>
<li class="style7">XHTML</li>
<li class="style7">CSS</li>
<li class="style7">Actionscript</li>
<li class="style7">Perl * </li>
<li class="style7">C *</li>
<li class="style7">C++ *</li>
</ul>
<span class="style7">*</span><span class="style3"> Still novice at current language. <br />
<br />
You don't need all those classes on the li items. Use your CSS to style the list. Give the UL an id name and then reference that UL to then style
the list within it.

As for the design, it's nice and clean, colors aren't bad, but you might want to
add an accent color to it make it a bit more interesting.
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Old 06-26-2006, 10:27 AM Re: Luny Designs
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i like how simple the site is to navigate. I would think of adding some graphics or images to get spice it up a bit. There's a lot of white space and seems very sterile to me.

Are those your real prices?!

Also, i looked at the 3 count website that you did and you might not want to use the picture you did at the top. From what I can tell it looks like Batista of wwe fame. You could be opening yourself up to some trouble if the wwe see's the pic and you don't have permission. just a thought...

overall looks really good!
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Old 06-26-2006, 11:11 AM Re: Luny Designs
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Thanks for the replies and comments.

@LadynRed: I feel really stupid I didnt think about that when I've done that in my other tags. Thanks for the reminder. lol


@bigfreak: are those bad prices?

WWE pictures are from the client's request, I told him the same thing but he didn't listen.
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Old 06-26-2006, 11:38 AM Re: Luny Designs
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i would hope you have a signed contract that says you are not responsible for content or images.

If they get sued and you did the site, you could be involved! Just a tip i got from a free web business class i attended and I use it all the time.

cheers!
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Old 06-26-2006, 01:04 PM Re: Luny Designs
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thanks for the look out. I am having contract made up as I type this.

but are my prices too expensive or too cheap?
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Old 06-26-2006, 01:25 PM Re: Luny Designs
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qoute: thanks for the look out. I am having contract made up as I type this.

but are my prices too expensive or too cheap?


I think those prices are too cheap but it depends on what type of sites you are designing.
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Old 06-26-2006, 02:16 PM Re: Luny Designs
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simple and nice design.
the link "work" in the menu doesnt seem to work.
the blue color for the heading banner looks good
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Old 06-27-2006, 07:39 AM Re: Luny Designs
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Try something a bit more exciting.
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Old 06-27-2006, 10:50 AM Re: Luny Designs
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i think your website is a bit of "boring" but i understand for the fact that it is a business website, but try to think...how can you attract customers to let their website be designed by you if your own website is so simple and a bit of boring. i'm not saying this to annoy you or anything, i just want to express my opinons. i think maybe you should add some flash contents, additional colors, dynamic buttons and other stuffs to attract customers...i also think that you should capitalize the space that you can get with your website, because i have noticed that the width is not maximized. i also think that you may add some "Thumbnails" of some examples of your work or your compamy's work on web design, for your visitors to have an idea of what they can expect from you...cheers!!!
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Old 07-03-2006, 09:25 AM Re: Luny Designs
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The site looks nice and clean.
Since you are using this as a sales/marketing site, pay closer attention to your typos and grammar. Ultimately, your content will dictate your success on line and mistakes in verbiage or grammar are far more harmful than lack of fancy graphics.

Good luck with your company.
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Old 07-03-2006, 09:31 AM Re: Luny Designs
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its to simple you dont have a logo, try and make it more appealing
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Old 07-03-2006, 12:18 PM Re: Luny Designs
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Lady your site has cool colors.I like this blue.It will be more attractive if you add some header image or graphic and footer.Because you are in designing you should expose some graphics in your header.This is my advice.
Use contact page intstead of static text.Because spammers will easily find your email and start to spam.Try free contact form available or try hotscripts.com in scripts section.
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