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Ghetto Trash Clothing. com

http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/

Working on a new site where I want to sell my old - full of holes - ghetto trash clothing.

I want everyone who is a designer to critique it now and give comments on how it should look and what they would like to see.

This is a design project that will actually sell my old worn disgusting looking clothes for their uniqueness. I want everyone to take part in it!

I want to use DIV Tags and CSS for this one so if there are any very intelligent DIV/CSS Web Designers out there, please share your info!

-Line
(I edited this post because I had the word "dirty" in the description of the clothing, I was just trying to come up with something quick, but please keep in mind, all the clothes will be washed.)
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Old 06-13-2006, 06:14 AM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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Well,it seems nice
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Old 06-13-2006, 10:20 AM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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i like this layout

expand it with some more colors and it's even better
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Old 06-13-2006, 01:36 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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hi

You site is kind wide it would look much better if make it fit in screen.

Good luck
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Old 06-13-2006, 07:47 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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bad idea on the big image up top. You should use an image that at least fits in an 800 pixel wide screen. (around 760-775 i would suggest)
b/c those w/ smaller resolution will get that annoying scroll bar at the bottom...

good luck!
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Old 06-14-2006, 12:41 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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Ok, you asked for it . First thing, if you're going to use CSS and proper markup, be it HTML or XHTML, put in a DOCTYPE. You're closing your tags properly, now put in the XHTML doctype to go with it. Make sure you close ALL tags, including the <img> tags if you go with XHTML.

The image as a header is fine, it's just a bit too wide. Even at 1024x768, my horizontal scrollbar comes up and you don't want that. Better to either move it left or narrow it down to no more than 780 wide and center it.

Your menu - too small and not prominent enough.
Don't use text and <br>'s for a menu, if you're going to use CSS, use a list for menus like this. You can have rollovers and backgrounds and make some very nice menus with CSS.

Don't use paragraphs and breaks for headings. That's what the H1-H6 tags are for. Use padding and margins to space out your text, not <br>s.

Now for your CSS.
It is not necessary to absolutely position everything. Use the natural document flow and source order. You're better off using floats, relative positioning and correct use of margins to position your elements.

For font sizing, use em's or percentages. 1em=16px and 100% = 16px. If you lock your font sizes with px or pt sizing, you prevent people using IE from being able to re-size your text. What you've got is a bit too small, but if you want it small, leave users the option to resize for readability. Not every visitor is 15 with 20-20 vision.

Scrap the 1000px on your containers. If you want them to stretch use 100% for width. In IE's broken box model, the total width is the box size PLUS padding PLUS margins, so keep that in mind.

Rethink the absolute positioning, you'll thank me for it in the end. Absolute positioning takes that box OUT of the normal document flow, usually NOT what you want. I would suggest making your container position: relative, float the left column left, push the center content area over (no float) with margin, then float the rightside box with float:right. If you use floats, you must learn to clear those floats to prevent float drop and other funky behaviors.

That should keep you busy for a while Glad to see you want to do it with CSS.
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Old 06-30-2006, 02:20 AM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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the sidebar looks too small, the logo is taking up too much space.

And who is going to buy used lingerie???
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Old 06-30-2006, 11:23 AM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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point no 1 - I quite agree you can't be seriously selling used lingerie. oooo errr yuck ! Acuse me of being a snob if you must but I wouldn't want to wear anyones old knickers or bra's.

Now for the matter at hand your website.

Css is fab and its great that you are giving the site a complete CSS feel. To be fair I havn't managed to convert myself completely away from using tables as layout features but do use and have used CSS for many years to style websites create menu's position and create graphics etc and today there is no excuse for a web designer not to get upto date with those principles at least.

So... now you have decided to use CSS get going on your style sheet. The menu definately needs work. The links are not prominent and affective enough. Wouldn't a nice background colour help the content stand out. Or box it in. Unfortunately you do have to be mindful of people who use an 800 x 600 resolution - no they arent all necessarily misers who wont upgrade and want to live in the dark ages some are users with visual impairments. Besides I like sites that are neatly laid out within a given space rather than too spread out and I can't be the only one as a vast proportion of aesthetically pleasing websites that exist are created within an 800 pixel width area.

Colours are nice look forward to seeing more graphics. Text is too small !

Neat work so far though - good luck with next phase of development.
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Old 07-03-2006, 10:02 AM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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I am a newbie at web design so keep that in mind

The layout looks good so far.
Possibly work on the overall color scheme of the site ( add a few colors to add interest) unless you want to stick with a black and white sort of theme. I would toss the brown brush stroke under your title. It doesnt really add to the overall look and is distracting. Otherwise, you appear to be on the right track. I like the way you flat out say, "...horrible, old, dirty, worn and full of holes."
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Old 07-03-2006, 12:42 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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you may want to add a border around the menu so it stands out more
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Old 07-03-2006, 05:27 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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lack of images make it somehow dull.
the links on the left are not working.
it doesnt fit 800x600 screen
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Old 07-05-2006, 12:33 AM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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Some links are static.I think you can make a tabbed like menu to give more look to your category.
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Old 07-05-2006, 04:28 AM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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Layout is great
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Old 07-07-2006, 01:45 AM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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At the moment it seems a bit bland or empty.
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Old 07-07-2006, 04:01 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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dirty lingerie? thats kinda nasty...

I think the logo needs work and the main paragraph is too close to the logo (it's almost touching)
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Old 07-09-2006, 03:01 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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Nice creative idea! My only thing is that the navigation bar on the left is a little plain. Maybe increase the font size or do something to make it stick out a little more.
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Old 07-09-2006, 07:34 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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Well, unlike other people I would critique more. GT in sircle should be your logo, which should be smaller. Ghetto Trash Closing looks nice, ofcourse should be smaller too, or at least on top. The brown line underneath should be removed. Or have an old style also. looks like somebody added it in paintbrush. Menu on the left does not look good. I barely noticed it. either draw some buttons or do css, and make it bigger. You don't have a website for showing your logo... which is too huge... Make it narrower... It is empty, so there would be less white space + it will fit on different resolution screens... thats about it... sorry, but that is what I really think. Work on it, it would be better. The idea is pretty good...
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Old 02-25-2007, 07:53 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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I like your website, well done
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Old 02-27-2007, 12:42 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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does your website work now?
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Old 02-27-2007, 05:07 PM Re: http://www.ghettotrashclothing.com/
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Yeh I like that layout, but don't you reckon a bit of colour would go down well?

And also I reckon you could either define the edges a little or make it a little less wide. But a great skeleton for if you want to improve it!
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