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Old 12-16-2005, 06:31 AM Rain Designs | Mockup
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Old 12-16-2005, 01:15 PM
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IMO, site design and color combination looks good. I think you should improve on the part of layout and you should add more content on home page. It should appear more professional.
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Old 12-18-2005, 06:38 AM
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This looks really smart, I can't really give any bad points other than maybe tone the reflection / shine on the floor a bit, it's looks a bit too strong.

Is the top half interactive / flash?
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Old 12-18-2005, 03:56 PM
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i dont like it.

the shadows under the furniture looks not correctly. Where is your source of light? on this draft is see global light.

Absolutely wrong arrangement of objects on page, from the point of view and design and a composition.

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http://www.webgamma.net/images/1.jpg take a look here... i have made the corrections
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Old 12-18-2005, 04:17 PM
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If the header is flash then this has the making to be a fine website - good work!!

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Old 12-19-2005, 11:59 AM
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wow that is really nice and creative. love it
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Old 12-19-2005, 02:25 PM
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Old 12-19-2005, 09:26 PM
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Wow nice template you did this yourself ?
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Old 12-19-2005, 11:37 PM
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I think it looks great, except I'm not sure about the grey area around the Rain Designs exhibit. To my eye it clashes a bit with the rest of it, by introducing a ragged faded area into clean lines and strong colours.

How would it look if you continued the dark wall on the left across the whole screen; made the right hand seat the same colour as the left hand one so it doesn't get lost in the wall; and then coloured the left hand seat the same as the red in the Rain Design logo so you don't end up with two seats the same colour, because I think the contrasting seats is a strong element of the design?
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Old 12-20-2005, 07:40 AM
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Wow nice template you did this yourself ?
Yes, it is my own work.
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Old 03-22-2006, 02:07 PM Re: Rain Designs | Mockup
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Yes, it is my own work.
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http://3dshop.com./cgi-bin/Gallery/show?Interior=1011 interesting idea, isn't it?
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Old 03-22-2006, 02:27 PM Re: Rain Designs | Mockup
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I like it a lot. VERY non-trendy! that's really a good thing. it is rare that you see a site with a fresh look. i disagree about the shadows... i think cojemeachin was very rude with their post by saying how wrong the light source looked. The light source would be from above and the shadows don't look very wrong if that is the case. They could be a little lighter but other than that it is good.
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the header is flash then this has the making to be a fine website
I could not DISAGREE more. flash ruins most sites. unless there is a necessity for flash I would encourage you to consider NOT using it. 99.99999% of flash i've seen is just for the sake of having flash on the website and the design would be just as effective, if not more so, without it.
excellent job and keep up the good work!
Oh yeah... and let me know when you get this site published. I'd like to add it as a link on my links page as an example of a good website.
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