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Hi Ray,
Very interesting subject and a very interesting website. However, it does need some redesign work to become an effective tool for people to understand what it is you do. As an 'artsy' type of website i.e. aura photo's, I think it needs a specific color-theme with more dramatic colors and certainly improved photo's, since that's your primary business. Your Home Page could reveal more information on what exactly aura photography is all about and what you do. Some of the text could be taken from your About page as well as your Aura Party page, just rewritten a bit to entice the reader to want to read more.
Also, on your Aura Party page, you talk about it as a "workshop" more than a "party", so why not call it what it is? It's either a Workshop or it's a Party. A bit of confusion there.
I think you've already laid the groundwork out as far as information goes now you just need to tweak it a bit and organize it more to make it more effective and provide your visitors with more information on what you can do for them.
Just my 2 cents,
DianeD
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