Review: Sellingwhiz.com -- "Internet Marketing Ideas For Internet Marketers".

**r2d246** · 09-13-2005, 02:39 AM

Hello, I gave 3 thorough reviews so I hope it's now my turn for some. I just launched this site Sellingwhiz.com . It's basically a 1 page site, in the format of a long sales letter. Then what I basically am selling is my ecommerce training course. It's all brand new so I need feedback big time. The more pointers you can give me the better. I'm concerned about load time for 56k users. There's probably other issues too that I'm not even aware of. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

Matt
Sellingwhiz.com
"Internet Marketing Ideas For Internet Marketers"

**extermin8tor** · 09-15-2005, 05:02 AM

it takes a while on dialup, get it together man, it WAY SLOW ON DIALUP.
like 5 minutes or something. other thatn that its ok, big text in start though

**forumrating** · 09-15-2005, 06:00 AM

worked alrite with me, but i hav 256 k pretty fast few seconds , but i would say visitors are prepared to wait for a while when it comes to making $$

**r2d246** · 09-15-2005, 12:24 PM

hmmmmmm, so it's slow to load in 56k ahh? I guess I'll have to try and test that out myself sometime. But if anyone else logs in on a 56k connection could you let me know if at least the first part loads so that you can at least start reading it while the rest loads. But if like it takes 5 minutes and you don't see anything then there would be a problem. Also if by chance anyone happens to read through it all, I'd be curious to know if it's too long or if it's interesting enough that people would actually read through all that, and how long does it take to read it all?

Matt
Sellingwhiz.com
"Internet Marketing Ideas For Internet Marketers"

**LGR** · 09-15-2005, 01:42 PM

I just wish that, if I'm going to be directed to these 'make fortunes overnight' sites, there'd be something new and inventive to keep me interested - whether that be in terms of content, or design.

It basically comes across as just another wind-up, with the ludicrously long pages and basic styling, and no matter how legitimate it may be, I had absolutley no inclination to stay and investigate further.

I closed the site after about ten seconds.

**zemadz** · 09-15-2005, 03:20 PM

Hello!

Why to put all content on one page? I suggest that you make categoris and/or create several pages with less text so that you put less content on one page and make :next page: buttons.

**DianeD** · 09-16-2005, 11:10 AM

I'm afraid that I have to agree with LGR. Same long-winded "get rich" sales letter. I, too, didn't read it all. Too much and too boring and too repetitive. Layout is nice, but then again, it looks much like all the other sales letters out there written by 'gurus'. Nothing to grab the readers attention. Try something different - even though you'll end up using the same info - divide it up so that the reader wants to read further. Keep 'em enticed enough to want to continue reading and ultimately go in for the sale.

Just my 2 cents,
DianeD

**artstyle** · 09-18-2005, 08:27 PM

Loaded quickly. Too long to read everything. Sounds like a too good to be true story. Nice pictures. Nice house.

**Yegorpb** · 09-21-2005, 06:09 AM

Split up your content into more pages, and try a more professional template. Yellow highlighting looks very unprofessional.