martintdesigns

**sixpacgenius** · 09-02-2005, 09:07 PM

I started this small little hobby over a year ago, and I have gotten better.
Just wan't a review on my latest work:
http://martint.cjb.net

I made this page as a "gateway" for all my other works and stuff.
Rate Away........

**zemadz** · 09-03-2005, 05:16 PM

Hello.

I think that the page has an interesting solution, but maybe it would be better to make a description of yourself and what you do and create a menu with the other headlines that you've got right now on the front page. It's only my oppinion and you've got every right to disagree.

Hope it helps.

**sixpacgenius** · 09-03-2005, 10:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zemadz

Hello.

I think that the page has an interesting solution, but maybe it would be better to make a description of yourself and what you do and create a menu with the other headlines that you've got right now on the front page. It's only my oppinion and you've got every right to disagree.

Hope it helps.

Well, I don't wan't a WEBSITE for my "splash" page. I just wan't all in one page.

**Sloth** · 09-04-2005, 05:14 AM

Well... The pink isn't terribly manly, but other than that.... Good page.

I think the text on the right looks a little blah though. Could use a really (really!) light and barely noticeable background or something to make it stand out a little more.

**NewEra** · 09-05-2005, 09:32 AM

the text is unreadable
plz change it
the page is kinda empty

**gringo** · 09-05-2005, 09:45 AM

Hi sixpacgenius,

this is pretty good if it's your first website. Anyway here are some small gripes I've got about it: the text is hard to read on the splash page (why have a splash page anyway?). On index.php there seems to be a bottom border or something under your logo that isn't present on blog.php. Some pages have it, some don't. The style of the upload page is completely different to your other pages, like I'm on another site, and I would prefer it if your standard links appeared on that page too - as it is all I can do is hit teh back button.

If you want your site pink, have it pink is what I say. Don't be too disheartened by the points I've made, it's a lot better than my first website!

**Romeo** · 09-05-2005, 12:17 PM

Hey,

The page is a bit blury...Pink is not my favourite color. Does it represent you ? You should talk through colors. Nice site though.

Romeo

**sixpacgenius** · 09-05-2005, 06:47 PM

Quote:

(why have a splash page anyway?).

It's not a splash, really, It's just a page, to "host" all my works.

Quote:

Hey,

The page is a bit blury...Pink is not my favourite color. Does it represent you ? You should talk through colors. Nice site though.

Romeo

Like I said in the site, I ran out of good colors, I wanted to do something unique.

Quote:

On index.php there seems to be a bottom border or something under your logo that isn't present on blog.php. Some pages have it, some don't. The style of the upload page is completely different to your other pages, like I'm on another site, and I would prefer it if your standard links appeared on that page too - as it is all I can do is hit teh back button.

I got No idea what your talking about..

**commandprompt** · 09-06-2005, 06:00 AM

i can see where your going with this, the graphics that are their are OK, the colors i think are great!, but it needs a little more character!

sorry if that sounds a little negative!

**DianeD** · 09-07-2005, 12:02 PM

I think it's a great concept, very original. However, I find that reading the text is quite an eye strain. Either make the text slightly larger or change the colors - something to make it easier to read. Very interesting site. Good luck!

Just my 2 cents,
DianeD

**dougadam** · 09-09-2005, 02:40 PM

I would change the color of your text.

**LGR** · 09-09-2005, 02:57 PM

Pink. Illegible. Indeterminable.

When I can sum up a website in three, one word sentences, none of which are remotely favourable, then there's something wrong somewhere.

There's no edge to the design. No unique element. There isn't even a wealth of content to keep a visitor interested for more than thirty seconds.

Splash pages are difficult to build in that they are very limited in how far they can go (which is why I don't think they're really worth having), but there is almost certainly more that could be done here.

**sixpacgenius** · 09-09-2005, 09:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LGR

Pink. Illegible. Indeterminable.

When I can sum up a website in three, one word sentences, none of which are remotely favourable, then there's something wrong somewhere.

There's no edge to the design. No unique element. There isn't even a wealth of content to keep a visitor interested for more than thirty seconds.

Splash pages are difficult to build in that they are very limited in how far they can go (which is why I don't think they're really worth having), but there is almost certainly more that could be done here.

You obvioulsy, didn't read ANYTHING, that I posted.

**Kaediem** · 09-10-2005, 01:24 AM

The pink on pink is way too hard to read although the contrast is better with the mouseover on the links, it is also too small I think.

I liked the layout of the lightness page - cool idea with the large graphic on the left like that but the links don't go anywhere? and I also agree that some colour in the font and a larger sized font would help the readability.

Lisa

**sixpacgenius** · 09-11-2005, 05:39 PM

New Design

**never_** · 09-12-2005, 01:11 AM

Well,it looks nice now.No more pink?

When i click your past works,all three of them seems to be using small fonts.

Anyways,the page is simple and clean.

**cre8ivemind** · 08-10-2006, 05:12 PM

hey your new design is looking good, but do some work on google ranking, good luck dear,