Website Review and Suggestions

**afcbob** · 08-07-2012, 03:49 PM

Hello all am putting the finishing touches to my site and want feedback plus if anyones see any problems to point them out.

www.polishedheaven.co.uk

Thanks for any feedback

**jelebiby** · 08-08-2012, 07:05 AM

Cool & clean design. The navigation is also user friendly. You have not started the meta tagging. Write your Meta Title & Meta Description tag using your major keywords.

**davemies** · 08-08-2012, 08:15 AM

nice but text is generally too small

too many indents too from headings to copy to lists

the 'P' of polished in the logo is too far away from the 'o' - adjust the kerning

stage one and stage two would look better if they took up most of the width of the site (with some white space, of course)

main background image is a bit weighty at 127kb - can't you optimise further?

don't forget your favicon

typo: "For most people there car is..." should be their

and it should be the most expensive purchase 'they' make (unless we're buying it for them)

**textGiraffe** · 08-14-2012, 12:54 PM

Good overview and nice website. Did not like the buttons at the top.

**DeividasS** · 08-30-2012, 04:41 AM

Clean and simple site, looks pretty nice. But nothing really special.
Main problem is content (text). I assume it's not completed yet. There should be no "is coming soon please check back again" parts.

Add more info (even some personal stuff if possible) at About Us page. Three sentences look a bit silly. If visitor bothered to click About Us link, he actually wanted to learn something.

**freelancevote** · 09-04-2012, 12:58 PM

The website looks very professional. However, I would recommend adding some CSS or even flash in the heading. It would breathe a little more life into it.

**myxxo** · 09-04-2012, 01:49 PM

I really like this. Fresh and clean, good job.

**daviedR** · 09-20-2012, 12:27 AM

The letter P in the logo seems a bit awkward.

**FredSheller** · 09-21-2012, 11:20 AM

Overall design is very nice, looks professional and modern. There are some spelling mistakes you need to correct, on the first page check the following sentences:

"For most people their car is part of everyday life and is the second most expensive purchase they make."

"We have serivce to fit everyones needs below is a list of some of the packages we do. If you can't see what you need please feel free to contact us."
Some major errors in this text, consider rephrasing it completely.

In the bullet points below this text there is some inconsistent use of capital letters. Example: "Wheels Cleaned and dressed"

Cheers!

**seller171078_FL** · 09-27-2012, 11:13 AM

You have selected very godo colors and navigation of your site is looking good very nice layout and professional work keep it up

**jbroberg** · 09-28-2012, 05:42 AM

Very nice graphic, and you color scheme is trustworthy. It's also somewhat mobile friendly. However, I think you could increase the font size slightly. You may also want to add more links to the "contact us" page. Your two service description areas toward the bottom of the homepage need to have a "call to action." Link to the contact page as the action you want your visitors to take. If you have a mobile version of the website, make your action "click to call."

John

**qwerty** · 10-03-2012, 01:51 AM

Very nice feel to the website. A great selling point for valeting clients!

**saudilawyers** · 11-13-2012, 05:50 AM

Needs more improvement. Better with actual car photos with glossy finish

**ODT** · 12-07-2012, 08:33 AM

The "Contact Us" section is not finished or is it?

I get only this output after filling in invalid form inputs and sending:
===================
Use Back - Enter valid e-mail

Feedback was NOT submitted

Go back! !
===================

Additionally, it looks strange to have a typo in the url: polishedheaven.co.uk/sendeail.php. But it is not a problem really.

**tahoecale** · 12-13-2012, 10:28 AM

looks really cool i like it the only thing i would change is to have the BG not all white.. some times too much white is bad

**goodguyjam** · 12-16-2012, 11:10 AM

Generally good but I think the different stages should be placed in boxes. I think the page would look better with a different background colour to provide some contrast and make the page look more attractive. At the moment, even though you are providing needed info, the whole text layout looks a bit mixed up and the whole experience of viewing the site a bit boring.

**Digmen1** · 01:54 PM

Yes it does tend to look a bit blank, I'm not a designer so cannot make any suggestions.

Here is some more grammar to fix

We have service to fit everyone's needs below is a list of some of the packages we do.

We have "services" or "a service"

And you need a comma or a full stop after "needs" or

And it should be "everyone's"

Glad to see Contact us shows a phone number

But I would add an email address, I hate filling in form to mail forms, and I think lots of people do.

Also I think this Stage 1 Stage 2 wording is a bit weird.

So I need you to do all 3 stages to may car ?

Why not package 1 2 and 3

Or Option 1 2 or 3