#1 (permalink)

Hello There Everyone,

Can you please review my site and tell me any points to improve it.

http://www.oneniner.com

Thanx in advacnce

webTechy

#2 (permalink)

Hi webtechy,

I can't seem to access your website for some reason. I should be able to access Brinkster sites from here. Anyway, it's getting late here. I will try again tomorrow.

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#3 (permalink)

Hi Webtechy,

Here's some IMO's for you.

The appearance is okay. It seems a little plain, but that does not make it bad.

The navigation is good. There are a couple of broken links, probably expected since it is a directory. The Chef's Corner had a link that were unaccessible; Cooking in a jiffy. I suggest, in the Chef's Corner, making the text slightly larger and a different color, red on black background can be difficult to read.

I suggest putting a link back to the home page on every page. The logo seems to be a link, but it didn't go anywhere (maybe just a bug, or coding problem).

The form followed the function. This is a personal preference, but when looking at directories I prefer to see the site name and a description. The url and the keywords would follow that. Regardless of whether that's a normal listing or not, I prefer to see the site name first.

BTW, you have a good About page. You might consider putting a little "teaser" line from it on the Home page to get people to read it.

I rate the site 6.3. Keep up the endeavor!

Dave

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#4 (permalink)

Basically looks good as for content, layout on the index looks kinda bland to me...dont really know what it needs maybe a different cell header color or something? and the spaces between the cell should match up more...kinda hard to follow whats what

The other pages look fine however

I like the images that correspond with the sections but i like this line taken from your help page:

"Sometimes you have to do what your heart say's and not the world expects from you!"

#5 (permalink)

Hey,

Thanx..HeadHurt..and Dmo..

This was my first website..and i am glad it was able to achive some reviews from such experts...

Thanxs for the About us Page. Some people in past have commented me that i write very good..lol

I am thinking of being an internet journal..

I have taken your points in consideration..and will apply them this moment..i want my site to be the best..

Regards

WebTechy

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"Sometimes you have to do what your heart say's and not what the world expects from you!"