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Old 05-09-2002, 09:07 AM expertise needed
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I would hugely appreciate a critique.

www.conformuk.com

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Old 05-09-2002, 03:18 PM Your Site
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Hi Karen! Welcome to Webmaster-Talk

About your site...

To be honest, I really could not find much wrong with it

The site looks nice. Load time was good. Colors and layout look pretty good.

The only thing I would think about is putting some text or adding to/under your logo: wheelchair cushion and bed mattresses
Or something like that.

In your opening paragraph, you have an extra space between: of and wheelchair...

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Old 05-12-2002, 12:02 AM
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Hi Karen,

I also think your site is very nice. I found it crisp, clean, and easy to navigate. All pages are very professional looking and loaded quickly.

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Old 05-13-2002, 01:58 AM
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Hi,

I have to agree with the chief,

You need to have some more informative branding on your frontpage page expressing exactly what it is you are selling.

On this note I would also increase the size of your main paragraph text or make it stand out in bold. This will get your point accross as well.

In all honestly I had to search a bit to find out what your site is about.

Other than that a nice site.

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Old 05-13-2002, 08:12 AM
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I think overall the site looks good. Loaded fast and easy to navigate. I have reviewed some of the site already will finish reviewing it this evening.

Here are some ideas that I had. These are just IMO's.

On the measurements, you should change height to high or add an in - for example 7.5 cm/4 in. in height.

On the Pressure relief matress description

Product overview:
Reworded to:
A single bed matress system features; 3 inflatable sections, 1 foam section (head support), 3 connector strips, pump and repair kit. Because of this unique design they provide:


Wheelchair spoke protectors

2nd paragraph, if in regards to new colours added each year. It should read something like this........
To spice up the look of your wheelchair for every day life as well as special occasions; Tewo starts rolling with seven designs. New designs are added evey year to increase the amount of choices you have.


Again these are just my opinions. Keep up the good work.


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Old 05-20-2002, 04:03 PM
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Hi Karen,

I agree, nice site! There are some good comments about it!

I think this is a good example of a good use of pop-ups! There is a discussion of pop-ups/pop-up stoppers here.

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