Chris Watts Multimedia

**Omega Xnpio** · 01-20-2005, 06:55 PM

This is about the 4-5th site i've made and wish to get suggestions and comments for it.

**Line** · 01-21-2005, 01:52 AM

Hi Chris!

Can you post the url of the site you wanted reviewed into your post?

Thanks ahead,
-Line

**pixelputty** · 01-21-2005, 06:06 AM

The google ads look out of place at the top and spoil the sites look, IMHO you need to blend the colours better.

I`m not sure if I like the graphic to the right inside of the box, but I do like the rest, it looks very nice, Having said that you still need to shade some tables and lay it out abit better, theres to much text going on and it`s hard to separate from that and the rest, it needs to flow better, well done though and good luck.

**dojo** · 01-21-2005, 06:24 AM

Yeah, google ads sure look horrid there. Blend them or get some smaller too. It's a pitty to have your layout spoiled by them

Good luck

**faze1** · 01-21-2005, 06:31 AM

I think some color would be help, the black and white is a little bit of a put off. I'm sure I understand the image on the right towards the top, it seems out of place.

**davemies** · 01-21-2005, 08:27 AM

text is too small or at least needs some more leading (line spacing)

**Omega Xnpio** · 01-22-2005, 08:12 PM

http://omegaxnpio.websiteallies.com/ that is the url. The google ads come with the free site and i have nothing to do with them and i can't change them, its one of the major drawbacks of free website hosting.

as for the text size i think its perfect for 1024 x 768 so im sorry if you're on a high res. and cannot see it.

as for the graghic to the right im not sure why i put it there so i guess i'll come up with something better, thanks again, Chris Watts

**davemies** · 01-23-2005, 04:36 AM

i'm on 1024 and it's too small for me, but then i know how to make it bigger (at least in firefox)

but because you have specified your text size in pixels then it can't easily be resized in IE so anyone with slightyl poorer eyesight is going to find it too small, and those with poor vision aren't going to manage at all.

there's a few validation erros as well if you're bothered

some of the text is very plain looking with no use of headings (some pages have bold text to look headings) but why not simply make your own styles for h1,h2 etc? and make the text a little larger than the body text? it would make it easier to read.

**montel** · 01-23-2005, 04:43 AM

Dosent look like a webdeisgn site more of a codeing one to me

**Omega Xnpio** · 01-23-2005, 01:24 PM

thats what i am a coder... lol.

**Omega Xnpio** · 01-23-2005, 01:25 PM

as for the css h1,h2, h3 i'll do that... thanks... good idea... should of done that in the first place... i wonder how that excaped me?

**wmtalk.tk** · 01-23-2005, 02:59 PM

www.f2g.net GET RID OF THE ADS! and get a shorter url while you do it. Best free host ever.

**Omega Xnpio** · 01-23-2005, 04:46 PM

i'll check it out...

**Sietse** · 01-23-2005, 09:00 PM

When it concerns the design, I am not totally convinced... From a webdesigner, I expect a design, while this is just text, text and text. At first, I had no clue about what to expect, where to start, etc. Maybe creating a bit more space and, indeed, using some CSS to attract people's attention towards the head titles.. Sorry for my critical comments, I am just a newbie here and I know I should start yelling at someone immediately, so don't take it too personal

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**mortalmadman** · 01-23-2005, 09:16 PM

Much too plain. You could of done much better. And if your tring to advertise web design, that's not the best thing to be putting up. Give it some spice if it's for web design. Try some flash.

**Omega Xnpio** · 01-23-2005, 10:51 PM

i am making flash for it... lol.