review my portfolio website

**mindlesswizard** · 11-06-2009, 12:56 AM

Hi Everyone

please review my web directory here and please give me your remarks and some suggestions if you have any.

Thanks a lot.

Regards

**Designer-J** · 03:31 PM

I'm assuming because it's written in English you are aiming for the western market. I highly recommend checking your spelling and grammar is perfect, otherwise potential clients won't give you a second look no matter how cheap you are. And having "I'm currently accepting freelance work and any hugs or a chilled beer you may be willing to share." written twice on one page makes me question your professionalism.

**hartofalyon** · 11-06-2009, 05:40 PM

i'm not sure if the unprofessional/personal approach works (all the 'lol', 'c ya') at all. most clients would rather deal with true professionals who can not only produce quality work, but also deliver on budget and on schedule. talking a lot about your personal life can't possibly do you any good, ie. how you like watching soccer and play video games. i'm also not sure why you have "<h1>Only god will judge me</h1>" in your header. it's not relevant in any way to web design.

design-wise, i would rethink having white text over a black background. it hurts the eyes to read. and as Designer-J said, fix the grammar. yes, it's very important.

**pritamsingh98** · 11-08-2009, 07:20 PM

its nice one yaar..................

**whatsherface_21** · 07:14 PM

You need a native English speaker to write your copy. That's not to be taken as an insult - your fluency in English is far superior to my fluency in any other language, but the subtle stuff is tripping you up.

I agree with hartofalyon in that "<h1>Only god will judge me</h1>" is pretty unexpected and will throw some people. Unless you intend to cater only to the devout, I'd rethink it.

***edited to add that visually your site looks good - though I only viewed it in firefox.***

**anikasara** · 11-10-2009, 10:12 PM

Hi,
I like this design but I think that font is too small. Usually I wear glasses but even with my glasses it is difficult to read text.

**mindlesswizard** · 11-11-2009, 12:44 PM

Thanks Dudes !!!!

I am working on another design for this website. I will let you guys know about it.

Cheers

**Dajos** · 11-11-2009, 11:06 PM

I like what you did from bellow the banner, but the banner itself seems very random, crowded and a bit too hectic.

**akki45** · 11-12-2009, 02:32 AM

Visited your website. Nice attempt! But lots of things need to be changed to give it a professional look. If you would like to utilize your website for your professional purpose then I feel sorry to say it would hardly work for you! Not from any part- design, color, text it's looking great. Really I also don't understand why you using h1 for Only God will judge me?? What does it mean actually? Anybody will get confused after seeing this. Also you've used your name within meta tags. Could you please let me know how it can help you to achieve good ranking in search engines?