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Old 11-11-2004, 11:03 AM http://www.teleportjobs.com
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TeleportJobs is a website that I have created for employers to list their job posts and job seekers to find a new career. Let me know what you think. If you are looking to hire personel and you are within the United States you can post a job on our site for free.

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Old 11-13-2004, 12:22 PM IMOs...
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A nice, simplistic design. I like the stickman motif! Some may disagree and think that it would look more professional with another design (and I could agree with that too). With the name of the site, I was looking for a teleporter (of the StarTrek variety, or even of the Fly variety) on the site.

The bottom seems a little messy. I suggest putting the copyright, TOS, etc. centered below the bottom border, and then put the IE and FireFox below that (and space and center them).

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Old 11-13-2004, 03:27 PM
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DaveMo~ put it well with his comment about the footer. It is a bit cluttered, especially with the links on the lefthand side each being on a seperate line.

The colored header boxes ("Are you looking for a new career?"/"Employer with too much work?") have a pixel or two on the inside of white that should be the background color of the textbox.

The spacing on the navbar looks a bit strange. Rather than letting it align itself (which is what it appears to be doing), I would just left-align the whole thing and put a little bit of space between each link. This will prevent the links from scattering dramatically on high resolutions.

I would make the five periods after "Teleport Yourself" into just a simple elipses ("..."). Having five periods just seems like casual AIM talk. :-)

I think the gradient in the logo fades too light on the "rt" in teleport. I'd either give it a stroke or make that gradient color darker.

I think the stick figure theme is original, but could use a little work as well. I would make a standard stick figure that can be used for each graphic, rather than drawing each one freehand. You could use a theme similar to the figures on typical bathroom signs, for example. These would probably give the site a more professional look.
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Old 11-13-2004, 03:55 PM
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it may look better if you have the stick man just falling away from the last letter s and the rope or what ever it is starting from the Teleport, add the slogan below it in a smaller font size, the menu links seem to be in abit of a jumble and IMHO need to start left to right, with the most important things first, Hime would be the first one IMO following on with others of importance.

I would take the coma out of the welcome, nice introduction, cute stick men, the tables below them need padding and maybe bulleted, now the login and signup area is wrong down there and needs to take importance at the top of the page, maybe top right inside the header area.

Finally the footer, as others have said, it needs sorting out, right now it is a jumble, from what I see down there, the main things to keep would be copyright, TOU and PP, the rest IMO should go, good luck.
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Old 11-13-2004, 05:49 PM
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hi nice simple site, Not too keen on your stick man in the logo. Also add some css to your links so they dont look like the bog standard links... look good though

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Old 11-15-2004, 06:39 AM
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Just one note: Your Go button needs moved, is a little confusing as to whether it is for log-in, or forgotten password...I think just move the forgot password link down below the Go button, and pull the button up closer to the login fields.

Might also move the login up near the top, right or left, would mean regulars wouldnt have to scroll so much.

I like the stick-men, but what exactly is the lad on the left doing???
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Old 11-15-2004, 02:27 PM
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nice simple design. Straight to the point

Have to agree about the login box, it'd be better towards the top of the screen (or at least entirely above the fold).

It'd probably be good to give a few randow job ads on the main page, to give visitors an idea of what you provide without havin gto click through to another page etc.
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