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Location: Edinburgh, Scotland
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Hiya, how you doin?...
Ok, overall "first visit impression" (as a prospective client type thing)....not quite sure where the "start is"...nothing kinda "leads me in"...there are wonderful colours, and real "cutey" icons/graphics (very clear, clean and fast to load)...but, no discernable navigation...(Ive been soooo guilty in the past of the very same thing!!!) I know you have the clickable navs down the right hand side (which actually IS correct, since most users are right handed, and to have navs on the left means pointers cover other information)
I expected the text that goes along with Premium Logo Design/ High-Res Icon Design to be clickable, and the actual clickable area is too smalll (I have the very same fault on my site!!!!)
Although the layout is good, in as much as its different, even as a very seasoned surfer, I did wonder where to look next?...it didnt "flow"
When I then looked back, reviewing as a designer, I found a few things that require "tidying"....
1. The left hand (immediate look logo) is comletely out of synch with the rest of the site colours and design. (on its own, its lovely!, but as part of this site...hmmmm...it jars)
2. The middle section of the header images, (the clouds?) dont line up perfectly, they are around 4 pixels out, whihc ...ok, I know its banal, but it kinda shows a "rushed element"...
Your testimonials are not clickable, and whilst they say great things, I had to search for them, then remove the commas before connecting to the sites. It might be a better showcase for you, if these sites were simply clickable links. ..and to be honest, "www.secureyours.com" for me, is not a good example graphically, of what you can achieve.
3. Your portfolio page, contains nothing clickable, there are no live sites behind this, and several "www.addresses.com" just dont exist. *jokerproductions.com*...you would be better advertising these as "examples of logos" rather than a "portfolio". (I know you have covered yourself, by the alt text on the link, and by the small text above the first image...but...hmmm, as a prospective client, I WOULd think I was heading for a full website..but thats only my HO.
4. Also, the designs of the logos, just seemed very "samey" to me...(but Ive been accused of the same thing, and I know if it works, dont re-invent it) how about separating them up with slight different logos?
5. "see other porfolio types" goes nowhere, the same with the little icons below that strip of text. Id be really put off by that. (sorry!!!!)
6. I didnt find "Let Us Create Your Dream World... on the Web!"
Give us a try and see the clear difference!" to be a fiar statement of what seemed to beon offer, considering the layout and design elements....
7. Please, I thought I would give a detailed review of a site I think will go places, overall it has a great "feel", lovely colours and sharp images/icons...but ...hmmm...it just seemed "disjointed"....nothing seems to flow, or be consitant, apart from the blue colour....
Anyhoos, I still think it looks good compared to many, and will do well...just me being detailed tonight!
cheers, scotia
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Last edited by scotia : 11-03-2004 at 06:08 PM.
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