I changed my site up since I submitted last...

**GregSticker** · 10-06-2008, 02:11 AM

If anyone would like to critique this... I did change up a few things since I last submitted it back in March of this year....

http://www.freewebs.com/gregsticker1/

**hartofalyon** · 10-06-2008, 11:52 AM

i think it's cool how the background changes with each page. however, there are a lot of things wrong. the navigation needs to be worked on. right now, it just looks like a paragraph of links. either group the pages together into more general categories or possibly look into a vertical menu.

your site's content have no structure or organization at all. it's just one thing below another. the font choice also isn't the best as well as font colors. comic sans is probably the last font i'd ever choose to use. the whole site just seems messy and i really have no idea where to click to get more information. there are photos left and right, some are links, some are not. some text here and there. you just need more organization of your content and not have it go all over the place.

**GregSticker** · 10-06-2008, 06:52 PM

Okay.... I concur. Thanks

**PozoorTeam** · 10-06-2008, 07:23 PM

It's a nice website .

**GregSticker** · 10-06-2008, 07:29 PM

I do have some improvements to go through though according to the user who viewed it before you. I will do that.

**hirewriters** · 10-07-2008, 07:59 AM

I am sorry but since you have asked for the views, I didn't like the background ... blue sky with whitish moons. It does not gel with the soothing white layout of your blog.

The links are all stuffed up at the top ... not good. Over all I wont say its a good design. Sorry.

**Yatwice** · 10-07-2008, 11:55 AM

Looks like a freewebs website, But im not going to hit you because your a newer webmaster, we all been there. Your content is great but the designing is horrible, it has amature writen all over it. Get some new tools, download dreamweaver & Adobe Photoshop and start playing! get a good FTP program like Filezilla then take that big step and register a .COM & Hosting. I use Godaddy.com because its very professional and easy to use.

**miksy123** · 10-11-2008, 05:50 AM

Your website could look better! Change the design and move your website to a paid host!

**pkpki** · 10-11-2008, 06:40 PM

Perhaps,you shouldn't change it for small changes may cause great influences.

**GregSticker** · 10-19-2008, 11:22 AM

I spent some time and redid the whole Smoosh Files Site.

I felt I needed to make some changes. I wanted to make the nav bar
easier to read so I moved it to the left and increased the size a
bit. I thought that all the fans who have visited it deserved
something newer. You can email me or post here what you like or
dislike about it.
I pretended that Smoosh themselves would
actually see it and I kept that in mind as I made my revisions. Now
the basic content is still there like stories, videos, reviews et al
but the look is what is most different. There should be more eye
appeal as far as text lay out and navigation should be easier.
Hope it meets everybody's approval.

Greg

http://www.freewebs.com/gregsticker1/

kidrad@...

the dark shine promises great skies in the fall . . .

**AJAJ** · 10-19-2008, 11:31 AM

Nice background but its too dark and the green text is not too user friendly.

**GregSticker** · 10-19-2008, 05:11 PM

Allright since AJAJ last commented I went all through my site and did it all over yet again. Now how does it look, i concur with AJAJ that the layout looked too dark. It looks more readable now, like a news paper or magazine.

I want these girls in this band to notice it.

**GregSticker** · 10-26-2008, 08:35 PM

I killed my site. Now how do I kill my membership here?