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{Welcome to our fantastic article directory(";") [Without the quotes I inserted a smiley:  ] our free article directory is full of articles that are free to use and free (to) reprint.
Free Articles for your Ezine, Newsletter, Websit(e), or (Blog). [Be sure to maintain consistency within sentences and paragraphs. Your original "sentence" switched format at the blog entry.] Also (use) them in your magazines, mailings(,) and newspapers!
We have indexed a huge collection of free articles on a variety of subjects. Just click on the appropriate category to find your free articles.
Feel free to use our free article search function, just type what you are looking for into our free article ("Search More") box and click on the search button. [It is not clear that the search box is related directly to the site.]}
I would move the welcome message to the top of the page then add your recommendation above the banner ad for Article Submitter. Maybe Directory Submitter too, since they are both listed on the IM Wishlist site. You have plenty of room and no fancy stuff so it might look/work well for you.
 I just attempted to register with ArticleFamily to post a legal article concerning on-line article copyright protections and permissions. My primary business email account runs through Gmail, along with its extended network of services. Since I went all the way through the process and was then denied access, there will be no registration or submission at this time. You need to place an advisory at the very top of the registration page stating that you DO NOT ACCEPT registrations utilizing a free email account! 
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In the true Literary Man there is thus ever, acknowledged or not by the world, a sacredness: he is the light of the world; the world's Priest; guiding it, like a sacred Pillar of Fire, in its dark pilgrimage through the waste of Time. (Thomas Carlyle)
Last edited by VOID Pheonix : 05-31-2008 at 03:51 PM.
Reason: Added registration issue.
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