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Old 05-24-2008, 10:29 AM ForTheLose.org - Review My Site
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Hey there.

I finally got around to making my own wordpress theme, and this is what I came up with. In the next version, I plan on cleaning things up and such in the overall layout.

Any suggestions / criticism?

Thanks.
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Old 05-25-2008, 07:56 AM Re: ForTheLose.org - Review My Site
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i like the look of your site, it is good.

what you could maybe do is neaten the links (buttons) on the left. maybe a linear layout.

but i couldn't really work out whatt your site is about. "crap on crap action" and "forthelose" lost me. try to add descriptive keywords in your title. it will also help you attract more traffic, through seo.

overall, nice site but still needs feedback to take it to the next level.
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Old 05-26-2008, 05:28 AM Re: ForTheLose.org - Review My Site
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The design looks good. The layout is good too. Just try to add some more bright colors in your navigational menu to make it more noticeable...
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Old 05-26-2008, 09:02 AM Re: ForTheLose.org - Review My Site
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the design looks good...
the blue and grey doesn't blend really well... imo
better change it.
and what's the "crap on crap action"???
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Old 05-26-2008, 04:28 PM Re: ForTheLose.org - Review My Site
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Heya,

Love the TV animation.. very cool.
I think animated buttons including more colour would be good.

Maybe include larger font sizes to empehsise certain aspects?

Also i am not sure whether the background is ideal? Dunno might just be me

Well done anyway
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Old 05-27-2008, 07:50 PM Re: ForTheLose.org - Review My Site
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it looks great but i couldnt find ought what it was about
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Old 05-28-2008, 12:37 PM Re: ForTheLose.org - Review My Site
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nice site ,design looks good
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Old 06-01-2008, 12:14 PM Re: ForTheLose.org - Review My Site
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Thanks everyone.

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it looks great but i couldnt find ought what it was about
lol, it says it in the header.. "Animations | Comics | Videos".
Then all you had to do was click the page links and you'd easily find out what it's about.
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