Fourth paragraph, final sentence: Please revise.
I read the existing reviews before I headed out on this adventure: therefore, I had high expectations. I considered bookmarking your site but, I wanted to try to help out on that last sentence first. I can not highlight the text (copy-protected?) in order to bring it out for editing. The word "but" might turn into "it" - then I tried to read the rest of the run on sentence and could not make enough sense out of it to be of any use to you as an editor.
I auto-subscribe to the sites I review so, I will be back again another time. The concept sounds good so far and, as you suggest, I will be researching you before I bookmark this site publicly/socially. 
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In the true Literary Man there is thus ever, acknowledged or not by the world, a sacredness: he is the light of the world; the world's Priest; guiding it, like a sacred Pillar of Fire, in its dark pilgrimage through the waste of Time. (Thomas Carlyle)
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