Please review my lence on squidoo

**magicman24** · 05-11-2008, 12:53 PM

Please help me and review my lence on squidoo, its new and the niche is good, this is what i think, any other opinion will be helpful.

http://www.squidoo.com/howtotalkdirtytomyboyfriend

Thanks!

**tamar** · 05-11-2008, 01:04 PM

I think you should focus on proper grammar in your Squidoo lenses.

**sizzler_chetan** · 05-11-2008, 03:19 PM

And your poor grammar is shown in the thread title itself.
Its Lens, not Lence.

And your lens is flagged right? And the lens looks very basic with not much customization.

**localhost8080** · 05-11-2008, 04:53 PM

lol, you need to practice your english =)
and look at the lenses about customising your content, there are loads of them

**andrei155** · 05-11-2008, 04:59 PM

wow comma abuse

what a nice little guide tho : D
Edit:
Now i can please my boyfriend lol

**tamar** · 05-11-2008, 05:06 PM

btw, what was the point of the lens? Why do you want to talk dirty to your boyfriend?

**sizzler_chetan** · 05-11-2008, 11:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tamar

btw, what was the point of the lens? Why do you want to talk dirty to your boyfriend?

Might be for fun? or its a completely new niche!!! Lol