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Your landing page contains about 50% graphic element, with the rest split between introductory text and site links. This could still work provided you employ a Site Map link to the right; this would lead to either a "standard" site map or your "internal" Home Page. The first line of your text detracts from the message tremendously. The [based in Leeds] portion completely takes me away from the first part of the sentence. Consider a semi-colon followed by [based in Leeds, (where?) our company... This allows you to keep the reference without causing me to lose your train of thought. As to the reviews: they are rather like a random web search to unknown places; new ideas, people, and places I might otherwise never have seen. Do come back for further review during the redesign. I'm looking forward to the metamorphosis.
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In the true Literary Man there is thus ever, acknowledged or not by the world, a sacredness: he is the light of the world; the world's Priest; guiding it, like a sacred Pillar of Fire, in its dark pilgrimage through the waste of Time. (Thomas Carlyle)
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