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A bit of a re-write might help on the opening text. This is just a suggestion:
Welcome to RateMyDisplay.com
As our name suggests, this is the place to upload your PC wallpaper to be rated by other users just like you. Is it HOT, or is it NOT? Are you up to the Peer Review challenge? Would you simply like to vote for your favs or flops? We're ready when you are at RateMyDisplay.com
Original text:
RateMyDisplay is a website about where users upload a image of their desktop wallpaper or laptop wallpaper display to get rated for the best display on the internet. It's kinder like a hot or not type of site but for wallpaper displays.
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In the true Literary Man there is thus ever, acknowledged or not by the world, a sacredness: he is the light of the world; the world's Priest; guiding it, like a sacred Pillar of Fire, in its dark pilgrimage through the waste of Time. (Thomas Carlyle)
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