Please Review My Article's Sites

**zifah** · 08:36 AM

hi everbody..i just wrote some articles and hope you all can view it and give your comment about my article...post your comment at that site ok.. you can clik at the links below to view my interesting article..

The Ways Dealing with Tension

Discipline Must Begins at Home

**Deusdies** · 04-16-2008, 01:50 PM

Nice layout, I always loved orange color

Adding some grey could also perform well.

**LadynRed** · 04-16-2008, 02:34 PM

I'd suggest you fix the grammar problems with your titles. "The Ways Dealing With Tension" just doesn't make sense, and neither does "Discipline Must Begins at Home"

I'd suggest "Ways of Dealing With Tension" and "Discipline Must Begin at Home".

If you're going to write in a language that is not your native tongue, I'd suggest you get someone who DOES speak that language natively to edit your content.

**MattCoops** · 04-16-2008, 02:49 PM

or, run the articles through a word document spell check.

**170 Designs** · 04-16-2008, 05:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LadynRed

If you're going to write in a language that is not your native tongue, I'd suggest you get someone who DOES speak that language natively to edit your content.

I second that suggestion. Site looks nice, appealing but the poor grammar is an immediate turn off for almost all U.S. users, at least for me

.

Matt

**zifah** · 04-16-2008, 11:21 PM

thanks everybody..i know my grammar are not good but don't worry..i will try to improve it..if you interested to send articles to me its ok..you can do it..

**Lpspider** · 04-16-2008, 11:27 PM

It does look pretty good. I like the layout and the color scheme, as well as the tags for popular topics. looks good.

So is this basically an article repository? a site like ezinearticles?

**zifah** · 04-16-2008, 11:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lpspider

It does look pretty good. I like the layout and the color scheme, as well as the tags for popular topics. looks good.

So is this basically an article repository? a site like ezinearticles?

thanks..i hope all of you can give your comment at that site..but please give your comment about that articles only..

**shafqatz** · 04-17-2008, 02:44 AM

There are some greamatical mistakes in your articles, i think you have to check it out thoroughly. The articles your are writing must be very clear and attractive to the reader, am not discouraging you but its a nice step towards articles

.

**zifah** · 04-17-2008, 08:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shafqatz

There are some greamatical mistakes in your articles, i think you have to check it out thoroughly. The articles your are writing must be very clear and attractive to the reader, am not discouraging you but its a nice step towards articles

.

thnak you..nice comment..

**zifah** · 04-17-2008, 12:41 PM

hi everybody..i hope you can help me by just review my site..just a simple work..thanks for those already review my site

**SiteFlipAcademy** · 04-17-2008, 03:11 PM

Hey Hafiz, just visited your site. I have seen some grammatical errors in your articles. I would suggest you ask for grammar check from someone you know who has expertise on that field. Great topics though and your site looks good.

**zifah** · 04-30-2008, 03:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SiteFlipAcademy

Hey Hafiz, just visited your site. I have seen some grammatical errors in your articles. I would suggest you ask for grammar check from someone you know who has expertise on that field. Great topics though and your site looks good.

thanks for ur comment..i will try to improve it..

**ChaunnaBrooke** · 04-30-2008, 03:57 PM

Besides teh grammar (thats everyones posting about) I like the layout and color scheme.. also if you're looking to to monetize your site I'd put up an advertisement thats relative to your content... the live search is great, but i think there are other ads you could use there that would relate better

just a thought