Please, review my site

**shafqatz** · 04-17-2008, 02:40 AM

Its rele great, keep it up.

**davemies** · 04-17-2008, 03:00 AM

it looks old.

**bromerg** · 04-18-2008, 08:27 AM

Why?
What is the reason for that?

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Originally Posted by davemies

it looks old.

**davemies** · 04-18-2008, 09:11 AM

it looks like sites from the 90's - at least some of the better sites from the 90's but still somehow old. maybe like the old adobe site from a while ago. it looks a bit too print design and not enough web design

too white black and red

**bromerg** · 04-20-2008, 05:08 AM

But I lke this design.

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Originally Posted by davemies

it looks like sites from the 90's - at least some of the better sites from the 90's but still somehow old. maybe like the old adobe site from a while ago. it looks a bit too print design and not enough web design

too white black and red

**davemies** · 04-20-2008, 05:55 AM

yep but 3 people think it looks a bit dated - so you have to ask yourself are you happy with it because you trust it and it's the opinion of 3 people, or could there be something that other, potential customers might feel too!?

as i see it the problems that need rectifying are:

- text too small and the site is bottom heavy - make the headings bigger and some image next to the first paragraph might be nice

- centre the site or make it fluid to fill the width, or put some simple texture or something to fill the white space at the right (makes the site feel unbalanced)

- get rid of the salmon pink and replace it with the dark red/magenta of the green screwdriver image *admin console* (the blue from the 'pen' would add a nice link colour or heading colour?!

- the logo drop shadow is too harsh

**Tixylix** · 04-20-2008, 08:55 AM

Loaded quickly, but I usually tend to stay away from flash - that's just me. I think maybe a bit more colour, it seems to be a bit too plain at the moment, otherwise it look good.

7/10

**FootyForums** · 04-20-2008, 10:30 AM

your site is very intersting. it is definitely attractive. overall i really like it.

**bromerg** · 04-23-2008, 07:59 AM

Thank you for this detailed review.
I will keep it in mind (specially "potential customers might feel too").

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Originally Posted by davemies

yep but 3 people think it looks a bit dated - so you have to ask yourself are you happy with it because you trust it and it's the opinion of 3 people, or could there be something that other, potential customers might feel too!?

as i see it the problems that need rectifying are:

- text too small and the site is bottom heavy - make the headings bigger and some image next to the first paragraph might be nice

- centre the site or make it fluid to fill the width, or put some simple texture or something to fill the white space at the right (makes the site feel unbalanced)

- get rid of the salmon pink and replace it with the dark red/magenta of the green screwdriver image *admin console* (the blue from the 'pen' would add a nice link colour or heading colour?!

- the logo drop shadow is too harsh

**summer14** · 04-23-2008, 04:57 PM

Very Nice, Smooth and clean site. Well done. congrats, hope you have a good rankings with it. smooth flash by the way.

**bromerg** · 05-16-2008, 03:19 PM

Thank you.

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Originally Posted by summer14

Very Nice, Smooth and clean site. Well done. congrats, hope you have a good rankings with it. smooth flash by the way.

**TopspinSports** · 05-17-2008, 02:17 AM

alright the site is a little "plain" as someone else said. I like the idea of the white simplicity. But theres something cluttering the simplicity that I cant put my finger on

**mg1313** · 05-19-2008, 06:13 PM

The "Solution Gate" logo doesn't do it for me...I don't like that dark shadow, at lest if it would be less darker and close to the letters.

At the end of the site you have some almost white text on a white background...very hard to read.

**kevath** · 05-20-2008, 07:08 AM

Nice flash design

**johnlloyd** · 05-20-2008, 07:27 AM

the site template is quite simple and the text is small, but i really like the flash design and images. I think you must focus more on the themes of your site but the rest are all good.

**bromerg** · 05-21-2008, 09:25 AM

Thank you all for negative and positive review.

**Mviner04** · 05-21-2008, 05:23 PM

I think that doing some more design to the content of your site may go a long way here. Overall the site is very nice, maybe "block" out the content sections a little bit more.

With the exception of the homepage, the content is just text on a page. Content is king, so make sure you design to your content, not to your nifty flash elements.