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Old 03-08-2008, 12:48 PM My New Site - www.playwith3.com -
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I'm still working on it, but this is what I have so far. I'm adding an information/news page and a graphic to let people know about my free shipping. Probably fixing up all the product pictures and taking genuine ones. So still have work to do. I just wanted a PLAIN and SIMPLE look.

www.playwith3.com

I'm surprised that I've got average sales since I've just started it after the new year and this is a very competitive market. Traffic is growing everyday too. I don't know much about Alexa, but I started off at 5 million and now I'm at 1.6 million.

My main target right now is in Canada until I figure out how to advertise this better. I went from 79 000 in Canada to 27 000 in the past 3 weeks, so I must be getting some traffic right?
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Old 03-09-2008, 01:31 PM Re: My New Site - www.playwith3.com -
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In general, the site has a clean and pleasing look. The large white box with your logo in the upper corner is unusual. I had to think about it for a minute but in the end I think I like it.

The tag line "Fuel the Gamer .. . " is great. I might add something here that sets you apart from your competition. "Huge selection", "Best prices", "Money back guarantee", "Since 2001" something like that to help visitors know what's special about your company/site.

On the product info pages, it feels a bit crowded. Perhaps add some whitespace below the price box and put some space between the original price and your price.

The font size in your site is small (looks like 8px on my screen) and does not adjust when I change the font size in my browser. You may want to fix this to make it more accessible for all your visitors.

On the product info page, the Reviews button underneath the price is misleading. When I see a magnifying glass I'm expecting a Search of some sort. Find a more appropriate icon.

Overall, I very much like the look and function. Good work.

I hope the feedback helps,

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Old 03-09-2008, 07:09 PM Re: My New Site - www.playwith3.com -
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i does look really good and clean,personally i really like it.good job
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Old 03-10-2008, 04:00 AM Re: My New Site - www.playwith3.com -
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your site look lovely
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Old 03-10-2008, 05:32 AM Re: My New Site - www.playwith3.com -
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Great, clean look

I would change a couple of things
- meta description and keywords are missing
- title can be optimized better say, http://www.playwith3.com/product_inf...products_id=67 can have a title of "Xbox 360 20Gb Hard Drive from Play With 3"
- content is king - add a bit of text to all pages. If it is a category describe the purpose of it and if it is a product talk about used and benefits.

Great effort

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Old 03-11-2008, 09:57 AM Re: My New Site - www.playwith3.com -
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Two things, I had very long page load times. And personally I would like to see more content on the pages. There are only 2 columns but three or four would also look very nice.
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Old 03-11-2008, 08:06 PM Re: My New Site - www.playwith3.com -
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Although I dont personally play video games, your site looked nice and professional with clean lines. I didnt sign in or anything but noticed that i didnt get a secure indicator on my screen. Maybe that comes after you sign in. Your bottom line speaks volumes so if your getting more and more sales I say keep doing what your doing and monitor carefully if you decide to change anything.
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Old 03-12-2008, 01:32 PM Re: My New Site - www.playwith3.com -
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nice site i think you've done a good job you could do with the xhtml validating thoe
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