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Old 01-28-2008, 02:17 AM Feedback and Suggestions
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Hi,

I have just designed a non-profit aviation website.
www.aviationearth.com
Do check it out and post your feedback and suggestions
they will be invaluable and i will immediately make the changes

You can also contact me using the contact us form

Thanks in advance

PS- if possible please click the AviTop.com link at the bottom of my homepage and give my site a good rating it will be highly appreciated
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Old 01-28-2008, 04:20 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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I'm an expert web browser if not an expert web designer. Here's some of my feedback on your site:
  • I like the color scheme but wonder if a blue scheme might be a better match for an aviation site.
  • The website is too wide. When I view it on my 19" monitor in IE7, I still need to horizontally scroll to see the full search box on the right. Squeeze it together a bit to bring the search box closer to the text.
  • The fact that the image in the header and the left navigation bar are different widths looks funny to me.
  • In the header, Aviation Earth looks lonely. The header is too big for such a small amount of content.
  • I don't like the fact that the Tell a Friend link is at the top of the left nav menu. Convince me why your site is of value (using prime real estate like the top of the left nav menu) then later (less prominently) ask me to refer a friend.
  • Under Aircraft Data, it would be more user friendly if the aircraft were divided by category (ie. commercial vs. military)
Just a few thoughts. Good luck with the site!

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Old 01-28-2008, 08:28 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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Thanks a lot Andrew.

Have taken your suggestions into consideration:
-> Have taken care of the search box
->Have made the two categories in A/C data
->Removed the tell a friend link on the homepage
-> Increased the size of the header on the home page

Please keep posting your suggestions
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Old 01-28-2008, 10:32 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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May i say some negative words, coz they must bring more help to you.
1) The quality of your "logo" (plane) is very poor. And it is cropped.
2) Bold everywhere is not a good idea. Use bold (not normal) to emphasise something.
3) Aviation Top100 and link-trash are optional and not for the main page. You must delete them completele from the index or show them in footer.
4) Showing date using JS is very bad. Use server-side scripts. For example, if on my computer today is 01/22/2007 the script will show me 2007. And if i turned JS off you will have an empty panel. What for?
5) font-size of your header on main and internal pages is different.
6) Using both vertical and horizontal navigation is a very very bad thing.

And i can't see here design, only positioning (of course, design is not only images, but still...). It looks like another cybersquatters' site... Try something new.
Hope this message will help you to improve.
Goog Luck!

BTW: Code is not valid (http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=ht...Inline&group=0)
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Old 01-28-2008, 12:48 PM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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Hi,
I am no expert by a long way but the banner is all wrong my friend.
Appart from the monsterous size of it, you need some impact.
I liked your idea of the plane overlay & the earth so i kept it the same.
I quickly did one in photoshop to show my point.

Somthing like that would be better IMO, but to impiment that
I think the pale green colour sceme would have to go too.

Shoot me down by all means if you dont agree.



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Old 01-28-2008, 01:24 PM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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sharkbait, anyway, your logo is also not perfect for for different spaces between words But it's just an example
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Old 01-28-2008, 01:51 PM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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This seems a good idea but you will obviously have a lot of work to make it even moderately comprehensive.
I would agree with a lot of the above especially regarding the quality of the logo and the colour scheme, I would have thought that shades of blue was more in keeping with the content.
I looked at your downloads are you sure about copyright on them.
Why have you declared your table width to be 123% this forces horizontal scrolling for no good reason that I can see, which IMO is not a good idea.
Any way good luck.
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Old 01-28-2008, 03:36 PM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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sharkbait, anyway, your logo is also not perfect for for different spaces between words But it's just an example

I said (I quickly did one in photoshop to show my point)
I didn't say I spent 3 hours pefecting this logo.

it was a quick 5 mins to explain my thoughts better...
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Old 02-14-2008, 09:14 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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well......
everyone thank you very very much!!!
I HAVE TAKEN EVERY ONES SUGGESTIONS SERIOUSLY......
i have got a new header, logo,
ive removed the date etc

and aldor...... i have taken permission from 3 photographers and the other pics are on the public domain

DO CHECK AVIATION EARTH AGAIN,
you can contact me via the contact us form on the site too

Thank you
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Old 02-15-2008, 09:28 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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I like the template and nice idea for a site, but i personally think there are too many shades of green. Maybe try adding a second theme color?
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Old 02-15-2008, 10:31 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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Hi,


First of all the website is very outdated ......

1) It lacks proper navigation path.......

2) I like its header

3) But the logo is very unprofessional
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Old 02-16-2008, 02:05 PM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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ohk......
please keep reviewing Aviation Earth
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Old 02-16-2008, 10:46 PM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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1. Color scheme is some what good.
2. You should decrease the left panel width, So that it will get better look
3. You may create a footer panel & keep Site map, Line exchange all that in footer panel, B'se Content panel must have only content.
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Old 02-17-2008, 08:42 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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Hi ,

First of all, why i need horizontal scroolbar on home page with my 22" lcd? ( I´m using Opera browser ) Preview is here:


Full ( 1680x1026 ) image - http://img8.imgup.eu/aviationearth.jpg

2, Text align - Home page is ok, but for example link "Aircraft Manufacturers". Something is aligned right, something center or left. It looks bad.


Full (1680x1026) image -
http://img3.imgup.eu/aviationearth2.jpg

3, Table layout...

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Old 02-19-2008, 11:25 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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Thanks for the review Bartosz will work on it

Please keep dropping in your suggestions on Aviation Earth
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Old 02-22-2008, 10:29 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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it would be great if everyone could drop in more reviews
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Old 02-22-2008, 03:12 PM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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I would redo the main content. Get rid of the welcome stuff, and get rid of the links. You already have them in your menu on the left. They are reduntant.

Write a great tag line, and give visitors what they want right off the bat. Another option might be to start over. I like your logo.

This is a classic example I like to use with clients when they ask me to build them a site. I ask them what the site is about, and why they want it. They never have a clear answer. When you have one, then start working on your site. It will be easy then.
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Old 03-01-2008, 12:49 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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I guess you are right. I hae removed the links and rephrased the text.


Does any have an idea of what text/information i can add to the home page?
I cannot focus on one topic like engines or a 747......


Do keep posting your suggestions

Thank You
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Old 03-02-2008, 01:23 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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I am a much better designer than coder or content writer but here is my 2 cents.

Coding Review

First of all I will go ahead and say it, because if I don’t I’m sure someone will; tables are out and divs are in. I would not tell you to go back and re-write your whole site but depending how serious you are about it and how much time you are willing to put into it I would consider it. I was also looking at your search form on your home page because it is off centered, and I noticed some mistakes in your coding you might want to look at, like as you see below you have <strong> tags around a comment, which you really don’t even need; then it’s repeated several times.

HTML Code:
</tr>
</table>
<strong>&lt; <!-- Begin Personal Site Search Form --></strong> <!-- End Personal Site Search Form -->
&gt;<strong>&lt; <!-- Begin Personal Site Search Form --></strong>
<form method="get" action="/.search"><input type="hidden" name="results_page" value="my_results.html" />
  <input type="text" name="query" value="" size="18" />
  <input type="submit" name="name" value="Search" /></form>
<!-- End Personal Site Search Form -->&gt;<br /></td>
</tr>
</table>
This is all I had time to show you, you might want to give it a look through to see if there are any other things like this that could easily fixed. Now back to the search form, try this code below and see how it looks if you don’t care for it you might need to use margins. (Note – I know this might not be the best way to fix it but just trying to help you out, and I am limited to what I can see and do by just reviewing it.)

Just replace the above code in your site with the new one below if you would like to see how it looks, you might need to make some minor changes.
HTML Code:
</tr><tr>
<td width="215"><br><br><div align="center"><strong>SEARCH OUR SITE</strong><form method="get" action="/.search"><input type="hidden" name="results_page" value="my_results.html" />
  <input type="text" name="query" value="" size="16" />
  <input type="submit" name="name" value="Search" /></div></td>
</tr>
</table>
</tr>
</table>
Design Review

First thing, the header, I am not crazy about it. A few suggestions you might want to think about. (And this is actually a little more in my field.) I would get rid of the drop shadow and separate box. It’s like you have a header inside a header. Then I would get rid of the starry background, I like stars and in some places they can look really nice, but I think it’s a little distracting in this case. Maybe do this; have the world and blend it into the background green or fade it; and that will bring out your plane more. I actually like how you did Aviation in your header but then earth is different to me it does not look like it goes together; maybe do earth the same way.

I think someone had mentioned about needing another color in your scheme, which I agree with. Maybe a cool grey.
You had asked about suggestions for added content to your home site; so here are a few. Maybe some icons that showed different types of planes that you could click on that took you to a page that showed their specs. You could put an event feed of upcoming air shows or something of that nature. Maybe a section that showed new stuff that has been added like media, clips, or stuff like that. Remember that most sites have little writing on their home site, it’s usually a page with a lot of different icons, pictures, and pages to go to.

I didn’t mean to go this long, sorry I get carried away sometimes. I hope this helps anyways. Good luck!
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Old 03-02-2008, 04:50 AM Re: Feedback and Suggestions
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Thanks for the lovely suggestions will definitely implement them
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