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Ok, let me try to give you a better review than "Hmm, not the best".
What is your site for?
When I first got there, I had no clue. The message doesn't spring out, and I think that's important.
People don't like to have to seek the message or purpose of a given site, they want it given to them, otherwise, they navigate away.
I'm sorry, I want to be constructive here, but I just didn't have time for the site. You need to make the message clear.
Ok, maybe people who are meant to be at the site will know what the site is for, but for people like me, i.e. someone who is coming to your site completely unprepared or unaware as to what I might find, I need to know, RIGHT AWAY-
*What the site can offer ME.
*Why does your site exist?
*How can you improve MY life?
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