Hi! I have one question about promoting our E-Cards services at http://ecards.pixkiosk.com
We have an opt-in list of PixKiosk news subscribers with their birthdays and I'd like to wish them a Happy Birthday and tell them that we have a great free online flash E-Cards editor that s/he can use to send greetings to their friends and relatives (there're actually also free flash games too).
This E-Cards flash editor is free and you can use backgrounds and objects either from our online Catalog or from your own pictures. Do you have any ideas how we can promote this service to our subscribers who have birthdays?
Now we send a "Happy Birthday!" e-mail to a person in the list with a link to a personolized e-card in the e-mail. For example:
http://ecards.pixkiosk.com/viewcrd.p...9a492d4696ec31
But according to the statistics, 90% of the people close their browsers after viewing their e-card  I assume that the text under the e-card is really bad. So, I plan to use the following text to attract users to learn more about PixKiosk. Could you comment on it?
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Dear USERNAME!
We congratulate you on your birthday. In such a remarkable day we wish you prosperity, happiness, success in your personal life and all the good luck in the world. May all your dreams come true!
You are not in the mood today to see these stars by your side? No problem! Just add pictures of you favourite stars to this e-card. To add your own photo to it just download your picture and place it wherever you want. PixKiosk made it extremely interesting and easy. On top of that it's absolutely free. Just click on this link and enjoy the creating process.
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Thanks in advance!
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