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Old 09-28-2007, 05:59 AM Please Critique my site positive-attitudes.com
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Hello there,
please critique my site.

www.positive-attitudes.com

I was add many articles, quotes about self development. So what do you think????

Please Give a Constructive Criticism please .
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Old 09-28-2007, 07:11 AM Re: Please Critique my site positive-attitudes.com
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You have overloaded adsense ads at the top of the page. The two large rectangles at the top of the page is useless , you can put them at the bottom of the page.
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Old 09-28-2007, 02:29 PM Re: Please Critique my site positive-attitudes.com
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It's boring. Too plain. I didn't want to read it and usually do have a positive attitude.

It would be awesome if there were no ads ; )

It would be better if you could replace it with some custom graphic work.
I'm not saying that because it's what I do. I truly believe that in today's Internet races you have to stand out and be different.

You have a message but by looking at the sight, you just can't tell what it is.

Pictures of happy people with great positive attitudes (not in an ad)

4.0 Needs improvement -- major lapses in design, functionality, or content



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Old 09-28-2007, 07:40 PM Re: Please Critique my site positive-attitudes.com
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Oh man..definitely too much Google Adsense. You should add more of your content and brake the monotonous with some more colors and graphics. Try to integrate ads in your content not other way around. You also placed your ads first, and bellow that is your content..you need to force people to read what you are writing, so work on your content...you will easily add ads later.
Keep working..

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Old 09-29-2007, 07:32 AM Re: Please Critique my site positive-attitudes.com
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Ivan, I do share your opinion on the website and its content. Mario, you should try to make your website brighter and eye-catching, using some different colors, pics and images and do not overload it with Google Adsense. It makes the website boring.
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Old 09-29-2007, 08:27 AM Re: Please Critique my site positive-attitudes.com
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far too much content on the front page, you need to play around with the colors, font size and styles...
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Old 10-01-2007, 11:54 PM Re: Please Critique my site positive-attitudes.com
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ok the header looks great very professional, but then bam!
is this a site devoted to google ads? you need to put your content in you homepage at the forefront of your site leave the ads for the other pages, I had to scroll down to find out what your site wa about, if I hadnt been looking to review I would have not looked any further.
poitives again the design is simple and looks professional
very pleasing on the eye, not packed with flashing pics and colours

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