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Originally posted by NeVeR
Hi,
I have made a few of these to show ppl and i have made them for companies , i'm here to try get a few more sold ,
take a look
http://www.rtgifts.com/1/index.html (made yesterday)
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Interesting but you should make the dollar signs transparent. It looks really bad when they go back out over the black line.
Also I would get some better ones, i.e. make some of your own in your graphics program. It isn't hard. Get Xara3D and you can make some pretty nifty 3D ones.
Hmm first off some of the text is too large after it zooms in. It shouldn't be cut off at the ends. Secondly I wouldn't have the intro keep running and running. I would make it stop after just one play.
The flash logo is good but the site is too wide. That navigation image is huge and I really don't like the look. It really doesn't do anything to enhance the site.
That one is pretty neat. I like the music and the color choice.
Hmm there are some errors in this one. For instance the text for the SPT 1800 doesn't fully display. Overall it is good but I would check it over for errors. Oh and it is also very wide. I have to scroll to see it.
Good start. I would like to see it when it is finished.
The logo on that one is a bit rough on the edges. I would touch it up a bit to smooth it out.
Also it is a bit long. A briefer overview would be better with more information provided inside on the website.
I also work with Swish and it is a great tool. Macro's Flash is still better but not so affordable and not so easy to learn.
There are other good tools out there that can work in conjuction with Swish now that you can import movies as sprites.
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