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Name: Adam for web page design, not program
Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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First of all, this is nothing more than a link drop and I'm surprised no one's reported it yet. There are four links in one post.
Second, Multitechie was right when he suggested English classes. Your sites are very difficult to read and this will pose problems with visitor retention (people aren't going to stay somewhere when they can't understand what it says). You'll have to learn English again, whether you like it or not.
Second, it just looks like you've thrown things together at random, with no thought given to how they connect or flow logically. For example, you have four random animations on your "Crazy Cool Funs" site (by the way, "funs" isn't a word). It totally throws off the whole site and creates a visual distraction.
Third, there is a certain humorous irony on the Dr. Love site; Dr. Love is supposed to reveal the truth and tell you your future path, yet the domain the site is hosted on is we.bs, which some of us would read as We BS (Bulls**t). I got a good laugh out of that one.
It's things like this that you'll need to correct. I'm not going to comment on aesthetics because that's subjective.
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