Feedback on business card

**pealo86** · 07-18-2009, 05:22 PM

Here is the image together with all the necessary info!
http://pealo86.deviantart.com/art/Ca...eded-129982306

Thanks to anyone who can help

**JeremyMiller** · 07-18-2009, 06:10 PM

Hard to read the white text on light blue.

**JSTYLISH** · 07-18-2009, 08:35 PM

I agree, ^^ - text is slightly difficult to read.

I like the design though, it's very...fresh. Just not too sure about the position from portrait to landscape.

**Giselle** · 07-19-2009, 12:29 PM

Very nice with a different design, I agree with everyone, the white text is a bit hard to read.

**TWD** · 07-20-2009, 04:05 AM

For starters, the text on the right hand side looks upside down relative to the background.

Using your Hue controls why not try changing the grass to a darker shade of green. That would surely fix the white on green readability problem.

The white text on the blue background is a bigger concern.
You should choose a darker color for your text.

**davemies** · 07-20-2009, 04:27 PM

best to write "stationery" (as in paper, writing materials, letters) unless you mean 'stopped, not moving'

(stationary)

**pealo86** · 07-24-2009, 01:34 PM

Thanks for the feedback, here's how the end result turned out!
http://pealo86.deviantart.com/art/Fr...Card-130583045

**pealo86** · 07-24-2009, 01:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by davemies

best to write "stationery" (as in paper, writing materials, letters) unless you mean 'stopped, not moving'

(stationary)

dang! Too late lol, oh well

**davemies** · 02:43 AM

apart from the typo

they look great. i like the 3 rounded corners!

**The-Pixel** · 07-24-2009, 09:52 PM

When I click that link I get 'File Not Found'. Looks like I'm unable to give my feedback

**pealo86** · 07-25-2009, 06:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The-Pixel

When I click that link I get 'File Not Found'. Looks like I'm unable to give my feedback

You need to click the link in my most recent post

**kagronick** · 07-25-2009, 08:16 PM

Unique design, it will probably catch a lot of people's attention.

**The-Pixel** · 07-25-2009, 08:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KkillgasmM

You need to click the link in my most recent post

Oh wow I'm blind, haha thanks for the help. I really like the design you took a unique approach. It will certainly pay off in the end. Great job!

**pradeepdot** · 07-31-2009, 03:43 AM

Ya really design looking very nice and attractive. Good work.

**simohammed** · 08-03-2009, 08:19 PM

Nice work. Good luck!

**relic200** · 08-14-2009, 12:57 PM

It almost looks like it's printed on some sort of plastic rather than typical cardstock.

Also, I think you could really benefit from the inclusion of a few ninjas. Probably 4 would be enough. Maybe 5.

**iditevzhopu** · 08-15-2009, 12:48 PM

Colors are a bit dull, but I like it.

**Cre8iveDesign** · 08-18-2009, 03:42 AM

great work, i like how you have photographed it on the grass.

**judi** · 08-19-2009, 11:54 AM

Looks Cool Mostly When You will have it printed i think it will look More better,
text is still hard to read