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Old 07-18-2009, 12:33 AM Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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As the title says, looking for some constructive criticism for my blog layout, especially the main text area. Is it ok like it is, or too simple etc?

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Old 07-19-2009, 07:03 AM Re: Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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Wow, great design!
I love the colours and the city/flower manip.
The text is really good too, but i think you should make it a little easier to read.
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Old 07-19-2009, 02:15 PM Re: Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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Looks cool. I am assuming the page will be centered without all that to the left an such?

The start(left side) of the "blog name" is a little hard to read. I love it over the city though.
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Old 07-20-2009, 04:07 AM Re: Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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It makes me feel dizzy.
And I can't read the left side of your header.
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Old 07-22-2009, 11:58 AM Re: Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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Robi: Thank you so much. Do you mean the main text or the header?

racer x: I was planning to have it aligned to the right. Does it look weird? I hadn't considered centering it, but I'm gonna try giving it a go later to see how it looks.

TWD: Dizzy? Because the image is upside down?

It appears that the left side of the header is hard to read. It's fine on my monitor, but I'm using a mac with a bright screen. I'll up the contrast a bit.

~new version of the layout will be uploaded later~
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Old 07-22-2009, 08:54 PM Re: Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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Sexy! And yeah, just bump up the contrast on the logo a bit. Remember, mac's have different gamma settings than most other computers.
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Old 07-27-2009, 03:10 AM Re: Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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Changed some stuff around.
Not sure about whether it's better centered or aligned to the right.

right: http://www.limokon.com/junk/hello.html
centered: http://www.limokon.com/junk/hey.html
a little bit different than the one above: http://www.limokon.com/junk/heyhey.html

As I look at the layout both aligned to the right and centered, I find that I like the slightly unconventional right aligned one better. It just works better for this layout.
Gonna go for that one, and then make a centered more regular one for the people who can't get used to stuff sitting on the right side of the screen.

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Old 07-30-2009, 04:38 PM Re: Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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I actually like the right-aligned version, it's different and that's not a bad thing. I think the centered version detracts from the effect of the graphic.
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Old 07-31-2009, 12:21 AM Re: Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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I like the design overall. Very nice relaxing colors that are easy to look at. I feel there is something missing and I'm not sure what it is. Perhaps if you work on the header more implementing different typography (text) elements it could make it stronger.
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Old 08-01-2009, 01:55 AM Re: Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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Ya design looking very cool and text are good also. Nice work.
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Old 08-03-2009, 05:41 AM Re: Constructive criticism for my blog (design only)
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howzit, just looked at the pages..The page needs to be aligned right, otherwise it completely destroys the effect you are trying to capture. You should stretch ur upside down city more towards the centre and change the colour of "The Limo" part of the text..should be a little more eyecatching. Awesome design on the overall though..
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