Reply
Banner for an iPodTouch Site
Old 06-04-2008, 08:22 PM Banner for an iPodTouch Site
Junior Talker

Posts: 1
Trades: 0
BTW I'm new here so, HI Webmaster-Talk community

So what do you guys think of the banner? Feedback no matter what side you choose is appreciated.

GenShane is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile
 
 
When You Register, These Ads Go Away!
Old 06-05-2008, 03:50 PM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
Super Talker

Posts: 129
Trades: 1
It does look good. Well done.

My problem with it was that I couldn't figure out what it was saying (xsellize). Maybe this is because of context here. I'm sure on your site it will look good.

Overall, I would say you've done well.
__________________
Watch Movies Online
yourmediaking is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile
 
Old 06-06-2008, 09:27 AM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
Sneakyheathen's Avatar
Ultra Talker

Posts: 341
Name: Corey Freeman
Trades: 0
The logo to the right seems a little messy. You can't distinguish the "s" from the "x". Other than that, I really like it. Nice job!
Sneakyheathen is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile Visit Sneakyheathen's homepage!
 
Old 06-06-2008, 12:26 PM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
Extreme Talker

Posts: 190
Name: Tim
Trades: 0
its a pretty good banner, but i personally don't like it i think you tried to implement too many effects into the banner also the logo doesn't look professional and is hard to read good look with banner anyway i hope my advice has been helpful.
__________________
Design Blog.. http://creativenerds.co.uk/
My Website/Portfolio.. www.timothyblake.com/
timothynblake is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile
 
Old 06-13-2008, 11:18 AM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
webcosmo's Avatar
Ultra Talker

Posts: 420
Location: Boston, MA
Trades: 1
Its busy but good one. Don't you think if should emphasize the ipod more on the design? Nice work
__________________
JOIN US * FAST GROWING WEBMASTER FORUM * JOIN US
Join the fun loving, helpful community of webmasters
Free Classified Ads
webcosmo is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile Visit webcosmo's homepage!
 
Old 06-29-2008, 02:57 PM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
BoutiqueMusic's Avatar
Average Talker

Posts: 26
Name: Tom
Location: Lombard, IL
Trades: 0
Very nice but the mirror effect is a little over the top. Scale that back and fix the XS on the right side.

I agree with webcosmo. You need to emphasize the iPod touch.
BoutiqueMusic is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile Visit BoutiqueMusic's homepage!
 
Old 07-05-2008, 09:31 AM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
Junior Talker

Posts: 3
Name: Anthony Johnson
Trades: 0
nice but the man text it to large and isnt getting the main message across about an ipod touch banner i dont think. But nice design
__________________
http://www.lnkcheap.com - The Smartest Dollar You Ever Spent!
lnkcheap is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile
 
Old 07-06-2008, 05:37 PM Re: Banner for an iPodTouch Site
serandfae's Avatar
Soul Man

Posts: 7,469
Name: Tim Daily
Location: Apex, NC, US, Sol 3
Trades: 0
Truthfully, I think it's a bit much. I didn't even see the, "Reach out and touch part" until a third look, same with the I-Pods in the background. Ditching the reflection and fireworks effect are highly recommended, as is the dark background.

Yet, on a positive note, the XS logo could be made into a solid branding logo and favicon, that is, if it's cleaned up some, depixelated and made where the X and S are both legible. It should be moved to the left of the full name logo.

I'd take time to consider a catch phrase more in line with your product and less a ripoff of Ma Bell. I'd also make the product more prominent.

tim
__________________
Springs hop eternal in the hearts of the eccentric....
E-GADS! (Evil Genius' Art and Design Studio) Mwah hah hah haah!!!

Last edited by serandfae; 07-06-2008 at 05:40 PM..
serandfae is offline
Reply With Quote
View Public Profile Visit serandfae's homepage!
 
Reply     « Reply to Banner for an iPodTouch Site
 

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off





   
RSS Feed  Feeds: RSS   JS   XML
RSS Feed  Feeds for this forum: RSS   JS   XML

 


Page generated in 0.11675 seconds with 13 queries