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Name: Tim Daily
Location: Apex, NC, US, Sol 3
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Truthfully, I think it's a bit much. I didn't even see the, "Reach out and touch part" until a third look, same with the I-Pods in the background. Ditching the reflection and fireworks effect are highly recommended, as is the dark background.
Yet, on a positive note, the XS logo could be made into a solid branding logo and favicon, that is, if it's cleaned up some, depixelated and made where the X and S are both legible. It should be moved to the left of the full name logo.
I'd take time to consider a catch phrase more in line with your product and less a ripoff of Ma Bell. I'd also make the product more prominent.
tim 
Last edited by serandfae; 07-06-2008 at 05:40 PM..
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