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Hi There -
Overall, it is a well put together design. I wonder if the graphic (at top) will appeal more to younger kids, than those already attending? Part of your appeal there has to be to alumni too (so they'll give big "gifts" of $$ to the school), and they may find it somewhat childish. I'm not saying the "style" of illustration is wrong, but maybe you could include some older silhouettes in it -- older students might want to go to school there too.
I agree with the first commentator on your choice of fonts for the main heads on the page. It is both rough, and has an 18th century feel to it. If you want a Calligraphic look, try something more refined with a modern look to it.
Best of success -
Scott
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