gooddesigner, I like the fonts and the layout but the feedback I've gotten is that the background is way too busy. Do you have something a little simpler?
MrNova, I like the design but I'd like the text to stand out a little more. Also, I'm told by the printer that the design is too dark. The finished product will be quite a bit darker than the image so it'll need to be lightened up. I was also told the transparent sweeping ark won't translate well to print and should be removed. Lastly the transparent bar across the top appears to be washing out the colors of the logo, can that be fixed?